are we ever gonna know the name of the merprince? lol. or is sesshoumaru and the merprince one and the same? just keep 'em coming!!
That merman got to be Sesshomaru, he said Hn and this one. Who is the youkai that cast a spell Kagome? Keep it coming.
Rose (Chapter 25) - Sun 10 Mar 2013
That chapter made me breathe a sigh of relief. But, oh my, what will the others do now that Kagome's missing? I absolutely love this story and look forward to it everyday. You truly do a wonderful job.
Maurice (Chapter 25) - Sun 10 Mar 2013
So I read all 25 chapters in 30 mins?? I hope that tells you that I REALLY like this story. The only thing that I'm wondering is "who is the Western Diayoukai, if its not Sesshomaru?!?!" Since its not Naraku, I'm stuck. Hopefully this character will be identified in later chapters!! Keep up the good work!!
great story! definitely mysterious, did both the western lord and the mer-prince use "this one" when speaking? keep it coming!
Tajia (Chapter 24) - Sun 10 Mar 2013
I really love this one, and I have yet to read another like it. The storyline is wonderful and the character depth is very good. The beach display was pretty creative. Again I am loving this story.
taixi (Chapter 24) - Sun 10 Mar 2013
Aaaargh, she KILLED them? Even if just two or three...this is definitely going to be seen as a much worse offense by the Mer-King as she is now an adult not a 10-year old child...I want to think this is another dream (why else would she have been at the shore during the night after all) but I am fairly certain this is reality. At least her reiki is suppressed now that she's been pulled into the water -- hopefully she won't be able to kill any others while dragged under...
correct me if I am wrong but has the western lord ever been refered to as seshomaru? I am kind of hoping that the merking is sheshomaru, and that the current 'bastard' lord of the west is inuyasha. I really want this to be true so I won't feel bad for rooting for the merking!!!
I'm glad your okay Starfyre, I hope you get better! I can't believe you did that to Kagome, I hope she's okay! Keep it coming.
megan (Chapter 1) - Sat 09 Mar 2013
Is it sad that Im rooting for the mer-prince? :) Great cliffhanger! Im really looking forward to the next chapter
Yup... you're positively evil for that cliffhanger... & where the F is Sesshomaru?! *LOL* Kags should kick the merprince in hs mer-balls ;-)
Loveyaa (Chapter 23) - Fri 08 Mar 2013
Hmm...interesting. That last dream was a little strange. It almost seemed as if someone was egging her on, both times. Wonder how Kagome's change in attitude will effect everything else, and especially the merprince's tatic to get her. Lots going on and everyone waiting for the first attack. I can't wait to see what happens next and hope you get better :)
Loveyaa (Chapter 23) - Fri 08 Mar 2013
Hmm...interesting. That last dream was a little strange. It almost seemed as if someone was egging her on, both times. Wonder how Kagome's change in attitude will effect everything else, and especially the merprince's tatic to get her. Lots going on and everyone waiting for the first attack. I can't wait to see what happens next and hope you get better :)
taixi (Chapter 23) - Fri 08 Mar 2013
oh my, what a distressing chapter! Hopefully Kagome will share her concerns and memories with everyone else (or at least maybe the slayers) so they can talk them out rather than just keeping her resolve inside. You've answered the question regarding her mysterious memory but raised a new one - how did the Voice (and visions) get inside her head in the first place? Natural telepathy? Presumably, the Western Lord will do the same thing again this time and that's his plan to get her to destroy the Mer-King. Now that she's older will she have any ability to defend against the Voice in her head?
Keep it coming.
Keep it coming.
I absolutely love this story. When i see the email in my inbox saying yu updated this, i squeel in my mind and go Yay!!!!
Eliona (Chapter 22) - Fri 08 Mar 2013
Things just get more and more interesting :) I think I know who that girl pup is haha.
Thank you for updating!!!!!!!! i can't wait for them to meet :D get well
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