Very good chapters. I wonder what the western lord is planningands what shippo is also planning I feel for him he must be hurting something bad if everyone is stupid to him

*Pouty face* I don't like Shippou being mad at every everyone....especially not at Kagome. But I guess thats children for you.

Aw, poor Shippo.  Things seem to be against him.

Excellent chapter as always.  

Kessa 

Keep it coming.

Alrighty sooo... I've read this whole story in under 24 hours, probably not healthy but I couldn't help it! This is such a good fiction, especially for an AU one. Definitely can't wait for the next update. :D :D :D :D :D

Poor Rin. Although we did see this coming. Sorta. You also got to feel bad for the family that was left behind and how since the husband will not be remembered kindly, the family might suffer. The western lord is so close, he can taste it. That just spells trouble. Good luck with classes and everything. I can't wait to see what happens next and the saving of the orphans.

I have thourghly enjoyed reading your story and can hardly wait for more chapters to be posted. Keep up the fabulous work.

Poor Rin! I had wondered when Kagome's vision would come into play. I'm just glad she is going to live! Great job as usual and I feel your pain about the homework.

Well....I guess her vision came to pass afterall......I feel kinda sad, but only a little as it makes sense. Rin is supposed to look to Sessh as a father and that's kinda difficult if, after the war, they disappear into the ocean.In

Nooo!   Wait.   Okay, hold on.  Thinking, thinking....

Rin will live...and be a mermaid, so Kagome will see her again, and eventually probably become her surrogate mother/sister....and the farmer who hurt her is dead. 

Yeah, I'm okay.  Great chapter!!!

Kessa

I laughed at your authors note, your muse is amusing.  I would have probably done the same thing hearing the term for a female dolphin.  

Thats an amazing idea Miroku has, I'm sure the merpeople will love to have the orphans

On to the next chapter-playing catch up again!

Kessa

Keep it coming.

Wow this is getting really good! The whole changing the orphans into merfolk is a great idea and lord know that the merfolk won't be te happiest people in the world with little ones coming to them. Looking forward to the chapter were they meet up with the western lord

Well that a good hundred or so off of Kagomes debt maybe? >.<

But the change could be dangerous not all of them would survive such a thing right? T-T

Heyyyy I'm baffled whether my other reviews have gone through or not but been a bit busy to check lol. Anyway another good chapter! Lovely very different lemon in the last chapter too, very intense! Yummy ! Love where the plot is going and finally everyone knows! Lol I like the new name vixen too xx hmm yeses can't wait to see how things progress xx

Woot woot! building up the numbers and giving all those children families....what an awesome idea!!!! Better hurry though, The "Lord" is on his way.

Tho, I do have to say, I'm glad that we got to see his more....wgat wird am I looking for....."honorable" I guess....his more honorable side by the fact that he is working as hard or harder than his soldiers and that he is recompensating the village.

Great work! I'm ready to celebrate the next anniversary, and I wish luck and focus in your classes.

Both chapters are great, keep it coming.

I agree with you decision to keep bitch because I can't look at the word cow without laughing now! Great chapter too! I'm happy everyone is in on the secret and the idea about the orphans is so good. Keep up the great work!

owwwww that was soooooooo cute!! and romantic !

i liked his giant analogy. It was very passionate and loving. I can't wait to see what happens next especially since Matsu now knows :)