Yay! Progress! I am so happy with the new development. I only hope that the lack of protest on Kagome's part is not just from shock, because goodness knows that I would be if that was me, hehehe. I can't wait for your next update!
I thought the same.finally. Now for some drama because things didn't go to we'll for sesshy
Whew! It's about time! I was starting to feel sorry for Sesshomaru with the way Kagome was acting. Wouldn't it be cruel if this turned out to be a dream?! I hope that won't be the case. Can't wait for more. =)
Kae (Chapter 89) - Mon 27 Jan 2014
YES! Throw caution to the wind! Dignity be damned! lol Get the girl, Sessh! You can do eet!
What's this?!
Is Sesshoumaru finally going to get bold in his prusuit?!
hmmm.... this could get an interesting reaction depending on how bold, and if Kagome finally sees what he's getting at...
Great update!
I look forward to more!
~Starfyre
Nice, keep it coming.
Lol! Cheese is yummy, yes, it is! I luffs cheese! Tanku for feeding me cheese! XDD
And this just proves how suitable you be for each other, you compensate for each other. Besides, sometimes her virtues are more of a burden and cause her sorrow, so you need to step up and protect her, champ!
Nuuuuuu!! Just talk to her and stop thinking and examining and dissecting every little thing in your mind before you go crazy or come to the wrong conclusion!
Poor Sesshy, he be resonating with her... that's so sweet!
On another note, I adore that word: inundate. More people should use it! Always! XDD
Wonderful, keep it coming. Happy New Year!
Wow! Such strong emotions!
This chapter was beautiful. I love Sesshoumaru's thought when he was panicing about Kagome's reaction. I don't
mean that I liked his being scared, rather the fact that he values her influence in his life to such an extent.. Lovely writing as usual.
Rhonda (Chapter 88) - Sun 05 Jan 2014
Beautiful!!...
So looking forward to more!
The last three chapters were great! I look forward to your updates this year! Happy New Year Ai!
thanks for the update. awesome set of chapters hahaha. poor seshy. at least before he is an oniichan. now he is unworthy?
Love it!! Though I also read this on Fanfiction and there's quite a few chapters missing over there haha. You're a good writer and I can't wait to read more!!
I know you said you didn't write your author's note for sympathy but that is not the main reason I'm writing this. I just want you to know how much I admire you for writing the prompt even though it was emotionally painful. It is always horrible to lose a loved one and to lose a parent is devastating. Your writing is beautiful and insightful. Literature is how we are able to show the world our thoughts and feelings. Sometimes the emotions we express are the ones that hurt the most. Thank you for writing this great story. My heart goes out to you for your loss.
Kae (Chapter 82) - Mon 02 Dec 2013
I am so, so sorry for your loss. I know how hard and painful it is to lose someone close to you. While I haven't lost my daddy yet, which I'm sure will be devistating, I did lose my grandfather 2 1/2 years ago. It was very painful and I still think of him and miss him everyday. I prayed for you and your family today. I hope you find peace again soon. My condolences.
Now about this chapter, it was beautiful and really shows Kagome's pain. You took your emotions and translated it into beautiful art in the form of the writen word. I hope to see more of this depth of emotion, not every author can accomplish that. So kudos.
God bless.
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