Excellent story. :)
All four chapters are great, Maya Angelou passed away, keep it coming.
How God Created Mother
God took the fragrance of a flower, The majesty of a tree, The gentleness of a morning a dew The calm of a quiet sea, The beauty of a twilight hour The soul of a starry night The laughter of the rippling brook, The grace of a bird in flight, Then God fashioned from these things A creation like no other, And when His masterpiece was through, He called it simply...MOTHER.
Happy Mother's Day!
I love the last few updates of your story here and consistenly cannot wait to read more. Can't say that I review much, mainly because I am too lazy, sorry to say :s. Come the story come as much you can, I'm loving it's progression.
Sweet, keep it coming.
Nice, keep it coming.
Good, keep it coming. Happy Belated Easter!
marisel (Chapter 82) - Thu 01 May 2014
i believe we all have the same feelings for a family member. just remember he will always be with you in your heart and dreams.
I am SO in love with your fic! The narrative is very sesshomaru, and the reactions are all spot on with everyone else! I look forward to seeing where it goes from here :)
Lakeiya (Chapter 104) - Wed 09 Apr 2014
I usually avoid first-person narrative, but this story is so well written! The sensativity of Sesshomaru's thoughts and feelings is shown beautifully through your choice of diction and I absolutely adore the direction in which you're taking the plot. Thank you for writing this and please continue with the wonderful work!
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