Hello, what a great story we hv got here. But, a few things i would like to highlight. This story focussed too much on Kag-Aoi relationship rather than Kag-Ses. Kagome was too brash and brazen to my liking in manner and speaking. Not to say had rude style of speaking. Even in the anime she actually didn't speak such way, even she was a bit annoying sometimes. I noticed most of the authors on Dokuga or on other websites seemed to have formed almost the same 'rude' character for Kagome, which not that suit her actual character actually. She indeed supposed to be out spoken because she came from the future which was more straight forward but not with foul mouth and being rude. She spoke based on fact and always chastised Inuyasha for behaving absurd. She supposed to be educated and a sisterly/motherly figure. She definitely a polite person despite her immodest way of clothing (that was short skirt -school uniform). In the anime, the most she would say idiot/stupid/baka/sit! and never cursed or swear like a bitch. In the anime, she was a bit childish and immature but in more innocent way, but not because she really meant to piss others. Please dear authorS that write SeKag story, plz do not damage her character further.
Nallely (Chapter 268) - Fri 23 Sep 2016
I really tried, but Kagome's personality is very OC in the whole story, she really acts like a bitch.
Nallely (Chapter 219) - Fri 23 Sep 2016
I will admit that it is very well written and it is different, but more than half of the story is not SK, I found my self reading only the dialogs and skipping chapter after chapter. I did not finish, sorry. It is just not my kind of story.
I officially LOVE Aoi MORE THAN Sesshomaru. OMG HE IS TOO CUTE I AM TOTING I SHIP HIM AND KAGOME SO HARD UGH
Susi8 (Chapter 475) - Mon 06 Jul 2015
Wow, this was a really good story! I finally got back to catching up with it and I finished it. You did a great job and I really enjoyed reading your story.
Blommie8 (Chapter 356) - Thu 19 Mar 2015
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