Reread from the start. Love how you are developing their relationship. Can't wait to see more.
Another update! The wait was well worth it *-* I have told you before how much I adored this chapter, but I shall gush about it again because I literally can’t help myself!
Your portrayal of both Sesshomaru and Kagome are spot on—perfection personified! Sesshomaru stands for ‘The Killing Perfection’ and yet you were able to create a believable scenario where he would bend his regal head, to discard his pride enough to show Kagome that she means more to him than she’d dared hope for. And Kagome is ‘Bird in a Cage’, but you successfully portray her freeing herself from her past girlhood and into the role of a maturing, young woman. Bravo!
I must admit that I love how we can see inside Sesshomaru’s head without going into his POV. That just goes to show that you are one awesome writer and must be applauded for your writing skills! I like (love) that you are taking things slow and not just jumping into a romance. Neither is ready for such a commitment, but you set in motion that feelings can develop, and I so can’t wait to see that journey!
I have said this before, but I will say it again. Your word choice is phenomenal! There are too many phrases/words/imagery you used to name them all, but suffice it to say, you had me captivated through the entire chapter! I almost through a fit when the chapter ended because it was THAT engrossing, but I shall be patient and await the next instalment to this delicious story you have fleshed out.
Though you have many fans, I shall always be your number one fan :D
twotoed (Chapter 18) - Tue 27 Jan 2015
I really like that- smiling for two people. Going to have to remember that one.
Perfect! I can't wait for more :)
Nile (Chapter 18) - Tue 27 Jan 2015
I've been waiting for an update on this one for some time. I'm extremely eager for more. :)
Eii! I can't wait for the next chapter! :)
It's been so long. Great, keep it coming Happy Belated Thanksgiving
I Love this fanfic, i just wish you would update more chapters at a time. Please update soon.
WaH! What a good update! I can't wait for the next one :)
Ankita (Chapter 17) - Sat 20 Dec 2014
^_^ Please please please update sooonnn pretty please
Ankita (Chapter 17) - Sat 20 Dec 2014
T_T dnt know i just felt like crying after reading this chapter T_T .... Thank you for updating ^_^ beautiful chapter
Georgie (Chapter 16) - Tue 16 Sep 2014
This story is amazing, I was close to tears at the end of this chapter :'( but in a fantastic way! Please update soon, I can't wait to read more!!
Eliona (Chapter 16) - Sat 26 Jul 2014
This story is so beautiful T_T I weep <3
Sailor Moon new anime has already aired two episodes, If you missed it you can watch them on youtube. Good chapter, keep it coming.
argh! im so torn up about this! i want them to get togethe, but everything that was mentioned makes sense. like, everything that has been said flowed naturally, as if the influence of fanfics and their magical, instant love was there, know what i mean? i want to read the rest, so hopefully you'll update and finish it because i love all that has happened. i like how kagome has dealt with everyone leaving her. we truly do see how she is trying to move on without a LONG timeskip or any instant reconciliation with anyone. i knwo that some corners will be cut, but as long as you still have the inclination (can't think of another word) then hopefully you'll update. love this story and great chapter :)
Mia (Chapter 15) - Sun 29 Jun 2014
Grr. Must read more!
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