They are so contradictory, I don't even know how to frame my review, or if that's even intentional. But I like it. I'm not sure what I think about the shift in tone yet though. Still seems a bit sudden.
She overreacted pretty quickly..
Oh no. You had me until "selvage of unraveling." That was a malapropism and very distracting. The whole point of selvage is that it doesn't unravel. I know what you were trying to do there, but you went overboard with the colorful metaphors on this one. "Edge of unraveling" would have done just fine.
Impatience.
Yeah the tone has definitely changed...
Um. Where did the flirting come from all of a sudden? Did I miss something?
That's an interesting communication system they have going there.
I don't remember where I left off on this one before it disappeared from ff.net. Hope everything is ok. Dokuga really needs a mobile version, I think more people would review if they did. It takes me forever unless I use my laptop. And I never use my laptop anymore.
ruyusaki (Chapter 28) - Fri 10 Apr 2015
I enjoyed this story very much
| Wow..make it kaggie pregnant!
I hope there is still lots of chapter.
How in the end their relationship,between kagome and inuyasha.
Sometimes i want to read drama more a lot of climax. Just like everyday life goes.
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| Wow..make it kaggie pregnant!
I hope there is still lots of chapter.
How in the end their relationship,between kagome and inuyasha.
Sometimes i want to read drama more a lot of climax. Just like everyday life goes.
O////o.....if that is talk...what does conversation imply?
Koree (Chapter 28) - Tue 07 Apr 2015
Lol Ah Don't We All Want The Pleasure Of Hearing Sesshomaru Laugh , Great Chap :)
To be honest, I'm kinda slow in the pick up of things sometimes, and while I get the gist of the last 3 chapters, I also feel slightly mind boggled and confused. @o@ but you shouldn't worry or anything, I may be the only one to be lost on the way to the pick up lol
I am happy I belive with the flow? Like, I can read throght it smoohly like sailing but I still wonder how I got there? Am I making any sense? or just rambling in your box? orz;;
sorry;; OAO// let's try that again
love the story! can't wait for more! I may re-read since I think I was overthinking. happy days!
| This chapter is so sad..
| I only read few chapter but i already like it..and a lot!
Coz sessy-kun and kaggie-chan is not ooc.
Keep it this way,sometime i really dont like the story to much ooc-ness. A little i can understand,but too much?i dont like. Slow proces but not too much long they fall in love. Just at the right moment. Not too soon like kaboom! They love each other in a blink of second they mate..it's a big no no to me.
I.......cant.......even.......wtf.
Dude .
I just read from start to here in an hr and a half. I couldnt stop reading
I have NEVER loved Sesshomaru more in my entire life. You had me flailing and fangirling as if he were telling it to me directly. I COULDNT BREATHE.
THIS IS BLOODY FANTASTIC. I LOVE IT. I LOVE IT. I LOVE IT. This is the HOTTEST I have ever seen Sessh, and you have spoiled me. I cant go back to ordinary fanfics now.
Please update soon. I cant handle the torture
Ankita (Chapter 28) - Tue 07 Apr 2015
*grinning frm ear to ear * happy happy happy *_*
Saiya (Chapter 28) - Mon 06 Apr 2015
Steamy MeoW.
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