this story reminds me of the book East... I think that's what its called. I loved that book. This story is great so far. Keep up the great work! :3c

Wow very intersting I can't wait to see how this turns out. At first it had the feel of Beauty and the Beast but now I find that it has a different feel to it. I can't remember the name of the book but it alot like this and I have a feeling I now know what Kagura is planning with that candle. But it has a lot of differances that I can't wait to see more of. And I like how you put Miroku in very nice touch with the sad face and than his peverted side comes out; that had me smiling and shaking my head as I thought 'He will never change'. 

I am truly impressed! It's Beauty and the beast and yet it's not! I love it!

Keep it coming.

please keep updating

Please post more!

I love this story already and it only has three chapters! :D

It has inspired me to draw some art for it too!

This story sounds interesting, keep it coming.

I'm really liking this story so far. I haven't read the one it's based off of, but it seems close to a beauty and the beast kind of tale. Really good either way.

Update again soon?

~Starfyre

I can hardly wait for the next chapter. Good job!

Just  got a not saying this was up.  Well done great start :)