Uh oh, I see worrying symptoms starting to make their presence known...

Awww how cute!!

I bet he makes such a lovely picture, lying there relaxed teeheehee

Aww poor Kags that has to be rough to deal with! :-( I can't wait to see what happens next!

Omfgasdfghjkl; I just finished watching the LotR! ILY<3

All five chapters are great, keep it coming.

I'm sure he would much prefer possessing Superman's X vision right now - yes, Henry Cavill must be mentioned again XDD

How dare he interrupt ice cream & movie night? I suggest he takes off his shirt, spreads ice cream all over the lickable muscles and make their own movie XD

Yes, I am not ashamed of saying that. I is a true GM teehee

No, please explain in great details how the accident happened *snickers*

Aw. so aodrable!!!I wonder if he is going to tell her about all the attention she is going to be getting? love the story!!

Yay for updates!!! I love them all! I can't wait to see what happens next~!

Bahahahahahaha!! My dirty mind just took a dive into the gutter with that sentence - on his to-do list today XDDD

Ehem...I'm shameless and proud of it! ;D

Loved the updates, Aviel-chan! <3

Chocolate works wonders indeed. There is virtually nothing that can't be cured with chocolate XDD

All five chapters are great, keep it coming.

I like your story, it is very well written.

What I also really like is how you put "Update X of Y" that way when my memory is failing and I just scroll to the last chapter I instantly know if I have gone to far.

Yeah, beauty is a crime xD

Yeah, he does cause that reaction to most women xD

She may be modest, but she's got some tongue on her xDD

Somehow she wasn't very convincing in her welcoming him xDD

I wonder who it is at the fair maiden's doorstep teehee