Thank you for all of your continued effort on this story!  You’ve done a beautiful job in capturing not only a great emotional spectrum, but also the depth within each feeling. It’s been captivating to watch each character change willingly (internal motivations) or in response to adversity; it’s appreciated that you also include their oscillating imperfections, not simply pushing instaneous mastery to push a quick plot. The heartache of the last chapter was palpable! Please keep up the good work! 

:( so sad , great chap 

What a heart wrenching chapter. So sad for everyone. Thanks for updating. 

omg so sad so far! poor shippo! poor Kohaku! the whole gang has had a massive loss! i feel so bad for them. i hope they can overcome this loss and become stronger and bring justice down on naraku's head!!! i hope to see an update soon! :)

Everyone isbtoken right now

Oh my goodness,  I am shaken. I didn't expect the death of Shippo. My heart hurts so much for Kagome. The raw emotion in the last few chapters and the emotional complexity of the characters as they struggle with themselves and each other is amazing. I love how you write such strong emotional impact and connection into your story.  Your story has the feel of one of those old samurai on the road to redemption stories. Your pacing for Sesshomaru's path to change is good and I am glad that you put costly setbacks on his path to becoming a better person. I look forward to reading more.

What a lovely, sad chapter. i am wondering if Shippou is really dead or if that was another of Narakus tricks? So sad if he is truly gone. He is one of my favorite characters. Also Thank You for such long chapters. They are wonderful. 

I hope Kagome will not drown in dispair when she wakes up. Shippo is in a better place now, I know Sesshomaru will protect Kagome. I can’t wait to read more though! I wonder how things will turn out. 

That's the worst decision he could have made. A mom in protection mode will kill anything that threatens her baby. A grief driven woman is just as bad. Combine the two and Naraku is one dead man! I can't wait to find out how she obliterates him. 

That's the worst decision he could have made. A mom in protection mode will kill anything that threatens her baby. A grief driven woman is just as bad. Combine the two and Naraku is one dead man! I can't wait to find out how she obliterates him. 

 Mmmmm, poor Shippou and poor Kagome. This story seems to have taken an odd turn after the last few chapters though, looking forward to seeing where it goes from here.

In my opinion kagome would not do that no matter what.  Even if you warn that it has a purpose to built character...  I feel hurt and disappointed.  Shippo s death wasn't a surprise that  big,  naraku was Always a coward,  but kagome should have known...  And she would never kill.  This is simply my opinion and my vision of her,  no disrespect meant.

It left a bitter taste in my mouth.... 

Either way Thx for updating! 

Happy Christmas! 

This is so intense, I can’t wait to read more!!! I am so eager to find out what happens next! Also Merry Christmas and a awesome new year!!!!! 

NONONONO! Yeah..I know what you said but not Shippou. Part of me did suspect he would do that anyway. He’s just an evil bastard. Cheers. Thanks for the update. 

I seriously do not see how this is getting so many reads/reviews. 

Well...DARN!!! Great update. Thanks so much! 

I love this fic so damn much! For you to leave a cliffie there is making my heart throb, I need more of this lovly fic. Please update soon!!

what? What? WHAT?! NOOOOOOOOOOO Don't leave it like this! Ship is just a lil kitsune! NOOOO! Wait....I know! You're uploading another chapter TONIGHT? Right? RIGHT? RIGHT?!!!!!

*gathers mob* RIGHT?????

hehe.....great story......but really, did you HAVE to stop there?!!!!

Wow! I had to go back and reread the last chapter. That was grim but this just layered more onto that. Poor Sango. And now Shippo in  Naraku‘s clutches. Im so glad you are picking this up again. Thanks for the update. Cheers!

Naraku's description was shiver inducing!

I am so sad for everyone! Such tragedies!

A very intense chapter and i thank you for updating! Was waiting for this! I love your fics! They have such unique plots!

Sorry autocorrect is messing the text!

Cheers!