The interaction between Sesshoumaru and Kagome is really lovely. He certainly seems to be sensitive to what she needs and when he needs to back off.
I'm sure I have read at least part of this story before, and I am so glad to have found it again. This is some powerful stuff. The second to last paragraph in this chapter is so compelling. It's so good to see Sesshoumaru finally throwing all his strength into his words as he promises to help Kagome get through this. Truthfully, he really DID play a huge role in what happened to her. He couldn't have known that his timing was so incredibly bad that he put Kagome in the wrong place at the wrong time to see Inuyasha and Kikyou, and THEN he kissed her just to piss Inuyasha off, leaving her vulnerable to Naraku and without anyone to go to her rescue. He really should feel a ton of guilt. And, he left her at his palace after he told her he wouldn't leave until she was recovered. Yeah, he owes her. I'm surprised Inuyasha didn't have a stronger reaction to discovering Kikyou was dead. Again. Reading on!
Smittee (Chapter 27) - Sat 02 Oct 2010
This story flows so well. I've enjoyed all I have read thus far.
| Awesome few chapters :) love it :) i can't wait to see what happens :) Sesshomaru's little secret ooo :)
Just came across this fic today and had to read it. I love the storyline and the plot. Very intriguing.
However, some paragraghs are a little too long, sentences poorly written, words missing. On the whole, it is fairly well written. A good BETA would be in order.
Can't wait for the next update. :)
Anonymous (Chapter 27) - Wed 18 Feb 2009
plz oh plz update sooooon
Formating prob, too easy to lose the spot your reading at when there's huge blocks of words. Good story though :P
| I love this story. Please update soon. Your very talented.
Maddie (Chapter 24) - Fri 23 Jan 2009
great job I love this story can't wait for more update soooon
Maddie (Chapter 23) - Thu 22 Jan 2009
I Love this story can't wait to read more update soon INUYASHA IS SUCH A BITCH!!!!! *__*
Hello Fluffy (Chapter 1) - Thu 22 Jan 2009
| I Like Your Story But I Was Suprised At The Few Reviews I Think This Story Deserves Some Props So Hats Off To A Good Writer. Update Again Soon Okay. Later Love.
joyouki (Chapter 21) - Mon 13 Oct 2008
| OMG THIS IS GETTING FREAKIN JUICY! I CAN'T WAIT HOW YOU WILL START THE NEXT CHAPTER. WILL SHE CONFESS HER FEELINGS AND HE WILL HIS! DAMN I CAN'T WAIT!!!
| this is a good story :) you might want to just reread some of the plot it's a little disjointed but the disjointedness is only small compared to the overall plot. i can't wait to see what happens in this story.
| i know im mad late with the review but please continue soon...i would like to know what is kagome gonna do now that she has realized she loves sesshomaru
Alekat (Chapter 21) - Sat 20 Sep 2008
| omg i love it...update soon
| See? Told ya you'd get terrific reviews here, didn't I?? You do, though, know how to leave us HANGING at the end of each chapter, don't you? *pouts* Oh well, I guess that just makes everyone that much more eager to pounce when they see updates! ;D ~~Wiccan~~
Inulovely383 (Chapter 20) - Fri 19 Sep 2008
| You're not going to have her hear him rutting with someone...please no...it will put her in a back in a bad state...she is falling in love with him. Oh I can't wait...please update soon.
shan (Chapter 17) - Sun 14 Sep 2008
| i'm having a lot of fun reading this. i can't wait to read more and see how all of this plays out!
keep up the great work!!
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