I really hope you will be adding more chapters soon. I look forward to reading what you have plan
Sesshoumaru leaning over and whispering that if she wanted, he would kill Inuyasha made me smile. For Sesshoumaru, it was a really sweet thing to say. LOL!
The interaction between Sesshoumaru and Kagome is really lovely. He certainly seems to be sensitive to what she needs and when he needs to back off.
I'm sure I have read at least part of this story before, and I am so glad to have found it again. This is some powerful stuff. The second to last paragraph in this chapter is so compelling. It's so good to see Sesshoumaru finally throwing all his strength into his words as he promises to help Kagome get through this. Truthfully, he really DID play a huge role in what happened to her. He couldn't have known that his timing was so incredibly bad that he put Kagome in the wrong place at the wrong time to see Inuyasha and Kikyou, and THEN he kissed her just to piss Inuyasha off, leaving her vulnerable to Naraku and without anyone to go to her rescue. He really should feel a ton of guilt. And, he left her at his palace after he told her he wouldn't leave until she was recovered. Yeah, he owes her. I'm surprised Inuyasha didn't have a stronger reaction to discovering Kikyou was dead. Again. Reading on!
This story flows so well. I've enjoyed all I have read thus far.
Just came across this fic today and had to read it. I love the storyline and the plot. Very intriguing.
However, some paragraghs are a little too long, sentences poorly written, words missing. On the whole, it is fairly well written. A good BETA would be in order.
Can't wait for the next update. :)
plz oh plz update sooooon
Formating prob, too easy to lose the spot your reading at when there's huge blocks of words. Good story though :P
great job I love this story can't wait for more update soooon
I Love this story can't wait to read more update soon INUYASHA IS SUCH A BITCH!!!!! *__*
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