Page 1 of 2
<< Start < Prev 1 2 Next > End >>
ponpiri (Chapter 3) - Sat 18 Mar 2017

this story is mad cute, but Sess is immune to purification, so the strength chapter isn't entirely correct. And I feel like even Kag wouldn't be stupid enough to really challenge Sess.

roberta. (Chapter 6) - Mon 01 Feb 2016

Good story nice and quick and we'll written. Thanks

MythMagykFae (Chapter 6) - Sun 06 Dec 2015

Wow, great job on this!

StormieLikeWeather (Chapter 6) - Sun 29 Nov 2015

This was so funny and sweet. I'm surprised I've never stumbled on it before now. 

Seluna Maru (Chapter 6) - Tue 23 Apr 2013

I don't get why you rated it MA when it clearly isn't that serious


Seluna Maru (Chapter 4) - Tue 23 Apr 2013

You sat Inuyasha way too much. The story is good but you spoilt it by sitting him too much.sometimes it is necessary cause he can be a pain, but its like you were just looking for an excuse to beat him down. You should hold back the rest of the gang seem to say the same things as yash n he was the only one being was over the top

Lisa (Chapter 6) - Tue 16 Apr 2013

proof read please, but otherwise nice


see03 (Chapter 6) - Mon 15 Apr 2013

Oohhh, a lovely ending! And not at all too late, because I'm a most patient person, and can wait as long as it takes for the good'uns ;D

Brittany (Chapter 5) - Mon 18 Mar 2013

Love this!!! 

princess of the western lands (Chapter 5) - Fri 22 Feb 2013

I liked the chapter a lot. Its going well and they don't seem like they almost instantly fell in love or that sesshomaru had an epiphany of some sort or was forced to either mate her or some demoness that would bore him to death. This is how I would imagine his mind working over a problem and sorting out the fact that kagome meets all his requirments except that she is still human. I wonder what his father found out that could extend a humans life span. 



looking forward to the next chapter


ja ne

LoveAndFaith (Chapter 5) - Tue 12 Feb 2013

Keep it coming.

eugenia salas (Chapter 5) - Tue 12 Feb 2013

i really liked this story i really hope you continue and update soon!!!

see03 (Chapter 5) - Tue 12 Feb 2013

I agree with your AN. This is a good, 'testing the waters' and thinking about it, passion chapter. XD

LoveAndFaith (Chapter 4) - Tue 12 Feb 2013

Keep it coming.

cassandra (Chapter 4) - Tue 12 Feb 2013

Well he's finally starting to get it. I can't wait to see what happens next!

see03 (Chapter 4) - Tue 12 Feb 2013

Hahahaha, Sesshoumaru's just about logic-ed himself into liking Kagome! Its only logical, Sesshoumaru!

Wonderful update!

Rachael (Chapter 3) - Fri 01 Feb 2013

Okay everyone is waaaaay too excitable. And dramatic. And it's like the logic centers of their braians are in disrepair. 

Thanks for the read.

Rachael (Chapter 2) - Fri 01 Feb 2013

Everyones too...excited...there are so many exclammation marks....I can't.....It's interesting it really is, I like it. It's just...perhaps tone down on the exclammation marks? I read sentences with those as being forceful and loud and with how many there are I can't help but get annoyed at the characters for making everything dramatic. 

see03 (Chapter 3) - Fri 01 Feb 2013

Hmm, interesting. I feel like Kagome's getting a little Mary-Sue-ish in challenging Sesshoumaru and having that sudden ability, but still an interesting update. I really do feel she wouldn't do that, but the Kagome you've developed so far is far more outspoken and brave than the one I have in my head, so good on ya for stickin' to your guns XD

LoveAndFaith (Chapter 3) - Fri 01 Feb 2013

Keep it coming.

Page 1 of 2
<< Start < Prev 1 2 Next > End >>

INUYASHA © Rumiko Takahashi/Shogakukan • Yomiuri TV • Sunrise 2000
No money is being made from the creation or viewing of content on this site, which is strictly for personal, non-commercial use, in accordance with the copyright.