Hope for more updates 

Just found this stconvinceory and can't wait to see how Sesshoumaru makes up to Kagome and convince his court that she's the one.

Stay safe.

Frickin fan-fawkin-tastic! You had me at the edge of my seat in this one. Gooooooo Inu momma! I'm so thrilled at her stepping up as she did. I am so excited that you will be adding more chapters to this even though you've met the challenge requirements. This story is much too good not to have a proper ending. Bravo! Amazing!  Yeeeeee!

This...was...sooooo...delightfully,  delicious...goodness gracious I am almost speechless. I read the entire encounter between Sesshomaru  with my mouth agape. Forgive me but...HOT FUCKING DAMN!  WOOOOOOOO! Ahem...my apologies for that outburst.  I was in this deep trance reading how he stalked toward her, how he claimed her mouth, with his lips and tongue and then suddenly... "What the HELL..." I cried, I flippin laughed so blasted hard. I pictured Inuyasha's expression.  I could hear his voice ha ha ha!!!! Brilliant chapter! 

I very much enjoyed how you express Sesshomaru' s, silent turmoil. There is tension and intensity that burns with in him,  that he never outwardly reveals. You've managed to bring it out so beautifully. Your words are mesmerizing. Well done.

I Sooooo love this story!!!!! Sesshomaru helped her with her algebra ha ha. I can't help but chuckle at his reference to her as, a clever wench. I'm hooked and this is just the second chapter! 

I'm a fan of your, Give me Love fic. I decided to take a peak at another one of your stories. I absolutely love this already! I've always enjoyed your style of writing in Give me Love. I see that very same technique here. Yup! I'm a fan!  What a fantastic first chapter! 

Hey, hope you're going to finish this up soon! I love it so much.

Oh, oh, i can't wait to read the next chapter, preatty please, update soon I really love your story!

Wait..::search, search:: That's IT!  I wanna know how it GOES! The tension is so thick! 

update soon please!!! :)

wow poor Kagome, that was not just a low blow but an entire five star restraunt's kitchen knife set in the back!

he needs drop kicked in the balls with a cinderblock for that! Seriously.

and then he expects her to just turn around and forgive him and act like everything is just fine between them?!

Are you sure he wasn't hangin' with naraku in between chapters taking lessons on how to be new level of asshole?

*glares at Sesshoumaru while giving Kagome lots of chocolate*

~Starfyre

I liked this chapter a lot, especially Sesshoumaru's words to Inuyasha about Kagome not meaning anything to him. It felt like something he would say just to piss of Inuyasha, not knowing if it was really how he felt.

A weakness I see in this chapter is Kagome saying Sesshoumaru's name right before the attack - its cliche, and really unnecessary. It would be better if she just had a thought that she might not make it, or that she has regrets, but I wouldn't directly mention Sesshoumaru. Similarly, I wouldn't have Sesshoumaru say he was coming for her. The fact that he is leaving and that his thoughts are on her ("If I leave he may truly attack the West…but the miko.") is enough, and more in tune with Sesshoumaru's personality than having him say "Hold on, I am coming for you, Kagome".

Otherwise, really fantastic. I feel so proud of Kagome that she has forgiven but not forgotten, and that is why I don't feel she should say Sesshoumaru's name in that moment. She's stronger than relying on her feelings for him, and capable of living without him, because as far as she is concerned, he's lied and humiliated her. He's an ally - nothing more. Not until he proves himself to her, anyway. And Sesshoumaru is realizing he cares about her and wants her, but hasn't really come to terms with it yet. Seeing her in danger will likely do it for him, but right now, I don't think he would say that last line.

I would end the chapter with this line - I form my youki cloud without further hesitation or argument, and set off in the direction that Ah-Un flew in from. - instead.

lol the grade card at the end was cute!

I'd review more but I can barely see straight i'm so tired.

I do better review next time

~Starfyre

Boy is Sesshomaru a dumbass! He can't figure out how much he really likes Kagome until he hurts her feelings? Seems like he and Inuyasha are more alike then they care to admit. I hope Sesshomaru can make it on time to save everyone!

Keep it coming.

I am thoroughly enjoying this story of yours. And I would have sat Inuyasha until I couldnt take it anymore, he is such an idiot. Please update soon.

So far so good, I am enjoy this a lot. I love the way you are shaping the characters attitudes. I like that Kagome tried to get along with Jaken. I am also liking the pass and fail at the bottom even though you are probably going to pass them all XD!!!! I am very much enjoying it and cant wait for more. 

Please have Kagome burn Inuyasha's booty for ruining the moment!

This was one hell of a chapter. First Sesshomaru gets all jealous over Kouga, then he gets all touchy feely with Kagome, only for dog boy to intrude. I can't wait to see what happens next. I hope all this doesn't cause problems in the group!

Sess a frog...*giggle*