I really love this story. Human Sesshoumaru turned out to be a smoldering piece of chocolate brownie! XD Thanks for the fun romantic story!
Such a refreshing story in the midst of other stories that just didn't do it for me. I needed this thanks Stella
too short, very cute and loveable. i'm glad i read this story. just enough to make you happy and satisfied. great writing. c'ya
I agree! Illegal!!
Reread and loved it again thank you!!
An exceptional story because it is true! Love it because this scene is somehow familiar. Congrats to the writer!Keep going with your vivid descriptions.
awe I so love this one! I can't believe that it's over. I'll have to reread it from the begining when I have the time
~Starfyre
Oh, what a lovely story!! I just adore the twins. Thank's so much for sharing this!!
This was a sweet story, in more ways than one. Snaps to Kagome's baking. I quite enjoyed the heat to the story, but also the sweetness. Happily ever after and chocolate, everything a good story needs :)
'Chocolate Smiles' is absolutely stunning. I am very happy that you wrote this wonderful story; filled with humour, fluff and a lovely plot. The 'lemon' chapter was erotic and sensual- a gentle passion rather than an... explosive fight like some others I have come across. Exactly what I like reading!
Your character establishment and development was masterful- Kagome and Sesshoumaru's relationship felt truly natural as it progressed and I loved the twins! *Secretly wishes you will write a sequel so there will be two sets of twins!*
And SM's prompts were also well-written. All and all, a great read! Your stories are enthralling and I hope you continue the good work :)
Thank you for hours of entertainment!
UnknownRandomness
awwwww.....so sweet!!!!!
What a terrific ending to a fantasticly sweet love story, hellcat :)It was funny how Sesshomaru was both horrified yet resigned to become a taste tester for something he thinks would be totally disgusting if it would make her happy. I love the characterization with how you made Sesshomaru this sweet, doting father figure. I feel in love with him all over again *sighs dreamily* Now that's what I call an irresistable man.
Perfect ending to a great story. Thank you!
a very cute ending to a very cute story!!
sad to see it go.
This story was amazing and I enjoyed.
Yay! A real date...ALONE! LOL
Well turnabout is fair play, she got to perv on his half-naked body last chapter!
She said yes!
This chapter was so cute! I love Kagome and the children bonding!
Nice! She has already gotten him in her home and now naked! Good Job Kagome! ;)
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