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LoveAndFaith (Chapter 6) - Thu 14 Feb 2013

Keep it coming, Happy Valentine's Day!


cassandra (Chapter 6) - Thu 14 Feb 2013

Oh I can't wait to see what Sesshomaru has in store for Inuyasha! I feel an ass kicking up ahead!


Elizabeth (Chapter 6) - Thu 14 Feb 2013

Ho! I love the direction that this story is going! I love Sesshoumaru's teasing too ;)


LoveAndFaith (Chapter 5) - Fri 08 Feb 2013

Keep it coming.


FaeHime (Chapter 5) - Fri 08 Feb 2013

Awwww! So cute *starry eyed* Silly children, you don't get in trouble for accidents!!! And oho! I wonder what Sesshomaru wants talk to Kagome about *shifty-eyed grin*

 

Wonderful chapter!!! The pacing was really good, and I'm so happy you came up with an actual, reasonable training schedule!!!


Azumii (Chapter 3) - Sun 03 Feb 2013

I can't help but be a little irritated in you saying that English is a language that is spoken in America... English was obviously originally from England so that should have been the response.  Also to say the World relies heavily on America is also not correct.  A little more thought should be given to such things. 
Other wise the story is fine so far. :)


smcandy (Chapter 4) - Fri 01 Feb 2013

Keep going this is getting better each update ^^


cassandra (Chapter 4) - Thu 31 Jan 2013

The part where Kagome told Jaken to stop because he thought he was dying, reminded me of the episode where Sesshomaru uses the tenseiga on him and he freaks out thinking that Sesshomaru killed him. I can't wait to see what kind of training Sesshomaru is going to make Kagome go through!


LoveAndFaith (Chapter 4) - Thu 31 Jan 2013

Keep it coming.


Lena (Chapter 4) - Thu 31 Jan 2013

\o/ Loving it!  :)


Lone saiyan woman (Chapter 2) - Thu 24 Jan 2013

Enjoying so far just a little correction I would like to suggest, it's entirely up to you however. When you spoke of the english language you described it as if it was of American origin. You should have at least mentioned it originating from the UK if you were going to delve into a little bit of history. Not flaming just suggesting. Hope to see more.


FaeHime (Chapter 3) - Thu 24 Jan 2013

I'm in class and squeeing my but off.... internally of course, or else my teacher might wonder why I am so excited about learning assesments XD

 

Loved this chapter, so much, and can't wait til next Thursday! *Seriously, I need MOAR!*

 

Arigato for the wonderful story!


cassandra (Chapter 3) - Thu 24 Jan 2013

I swear Sesshomaru's curiousity is too cute sometimes.


LoveAndFaith (Chapter 3) - Thu 24 Jan 2013

Keep it coming.


FaeHime (Chapter 2) - Fri 18 Jan 2013

Okay, this chapter was spades better than that first chapter! Sorry, girl, but the crack-ness of that prologue had me choking on my own laughter!

I love where you took this, and am super excited that I actually don;t have long to wait til you post the next chapter, what with how I was out of it the whole week and only up to reading it today :3

 

I like how you've characterized Kagome so far, especially the subtle differences in her reactions to him wanting to know about her stdies and her time~ many fics have a tendancy to have her get unnecessarily nervous, or secretive or over enthusiastic. Or they have Sesshomaru get all standoffish and snobbish about the fact that she obviously knows more than him or knows something he doesn't.

Their little exchange here at the end of the chapter showed a genuine sharing of knowledge and mutual interest in information. I enjoyed this chapter a lot! Great job!


LoveAndFaith (Chapter 2) - Thu 17 Jan 2013

Keep it coming.


sesshomarusama33 (Chapter 2) - Thu 17 Jan 2013

I really like what you've got going so far - I can't wait to read the next chapter! Surely Kagome can't convince him that she's better than those other demoness'! (;


Sala (Chapter 2) - Thu 17 Jan 2013

I don’t see the harm in you seeing a modern map.


Actually, showing him a modern map with political boundaries probably *would* be a bad idea.  It would be better to show him a physical map (one that only shows landforms and water).


LoveAndFaith (Chapter 1) - Sat 12 Jan 2013

This story sounds interesting, keep it coming. Happy New Year!


Kristina (Chapter 1) - Fri 11 Jan 2013

Oh my goodness I am so excited to see where you take this story!! As it was I was chuckling as I read Sess's requirements for a mate!!! I look forward to each new chapter as you go!! Thank you for sharing your story!!

Stina


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