BAHAHAH! Oh my god, so funny! Waiting patiently for another chapter! *holds onto seat with anticipation*
XD
Oh my God!
This was hilarious, I'm waiting patiently for another chapter! :D
Your story is absolutely fabulous, I love it please update soon!
Saholia (Chapter 3) - Tue 15 Jan 2013
LMAO! Awesome chapter! Your story has so much potential, I seriuosly can't wait till your next update ;)
Girl, I really love this story of yours!! Rin-chan is simply adorable and Sesshy...yum xD I can't wait to see what happens next on their date! There are some slight mistakes in spellng and grammar - easily fixable though. Do you have a Beta? If you would be interested - and this is just a suggestion with no offense meant - I could offer a little help. Granted English is not my native language, but I could correct some tiny mistakes. If you are interested pm me. But, it's totally fine if you don't wish for a Beta. Your story is incredible either way ^^
Thank you for the update! I'm looking forward to reading the next chapter :)
Aww, a lovely chapter! Just imagining him hovering around with a worried look on his perfect face...xD The gum just finished me off though lol Men; they are completely useless in situations like these, aren't they?
Thank you for the quick update! I'm looking forward to the next chapter ^^
Awww.... awkward Daddy Fluffy is so cute. :D
Awes soooo cute! I used the word jiffy today and someone had to ask me how long a jiffy was, lol.
Madison (Chapter 2) - Mon 14 Jan 2013
Ice cream shops stories are a weakness of mine. This is a very cute story so far. I'm looking forward to reading more.
I think I've read this story before. Whether it's on FF.net or another, I'm not sure. But I've loved this story and I'm kind of sad that it's still on its first chapter. I really hope you can update soon. Ice cream themes would sure be a lovely bonus! :))
Very nice! Update soon!!
Awwwww...I sure hope there is a quick update to this with his thoughts on Kagome...
Yeah for Rin playing the unknowing matchmaker! Had to giggle at 'sexy beast'. :D
Now that is a very fine story! I'm quite taken with this first chapter and would definitely like to see more of it! You hit on one of my major weaknesses, girl! Men being affectionate with children...I swear, no sane woman can resist that combination. It should be declared illegal because it's hazardous for the mental health of all women! xD Plus, you write my kind of humor *winks*
Looking forward to your next update ^^
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