short, sweet, and lovely~with lemon-y goodness at the end. keep writing fan fiction like this and i'll be sure to read it and give good reviews. keep up the great writing. c'ya'
actrivi (Chapter 7) - Sun 22 Nov 2015
You sucessfully created a fluff-filled lemon! Great work :) Thanks for writing.
Raynell (Chapter 7) - Thu 27 Aug 2015
Awwwh, I love this story. The sexual tension, the developing relationship: they were done well. I do wish the story was longer. Thanks for sharing your creativity.
There, is it? BEST LINE EVER!!! Lol
Liv (Chapter 7) - Mon 29 Sep 2014
You have instantly become my favorite author on this site!! I absolutely love your stories! Please don't ever stop!
Yay! A lovely little taste of fluff before I go back and catch up on APM. :)
I read this story a while back and never had the chance to review with relish, being an anonymous reader then... it was quite a task searching for it, to do just that..... so here I am.... Loved it....:)
I really liked this fics. It was very sweet. :D
wow what an awesome story,,,but now that she's his mate.....will he go back home?
Was marking her as his mate the reason why he didn't return?
Sarah (Chapter 7) - Sat 16 Mar 2013
Was awesome nice job, short and sweet..
I could read this over and over again. Oh wait, I did just read it over and over again!!!
Awesome my dear!
AngelHeart2122 (Chapter 7) - Tue 05 Feb 2013
This story was so sweet! I loved it!
This story was amazing! Filled with fluff and cuteness! I really enjoyed the last chapter! It was very fluffy yet erotic at the same time! You definitely succeeded in portraying that!
Fantastic story! I am actually sad to see it over ^^
Phyllis (Chapter 7) - Sat 02 Feb 2013
LOVED IT!!! What a great culmination to all the tension between the two. You did splendidly!!
I loved the chapter and loved the story. Totally awesome work!
This chapter was HOT!! The Story was awesome, amazing and it had a beautiful ending, and I also enjoyed it!
TKE (Chapter 7) - Sat 02 Feb 2013
This was a beautiful story and "HAWT" ending...lol! Great job!
Yay! Finally they're getting somewhere! It took them long enough!
Ohhh, now that was some hot, steamy progress *fans herself* You know, I don't blame Kagome...even an experienced woman would forget how to breathe if she were in her place lol
Loved the chapter! Can't wait for the final - naughty - chapter! You had a great idea for 'agate' ^^
Keep it coming.
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