when you say beat, you do mean beat right?

because, as much as i love inuyasha, i have some issues with his behavior and i would love to see him get beaten to a pulp, courtesy of his big bro!

i know this is probably crazy, but my favorite part wasn't when he complimented her or thought well of her.

it was when he looked at her lips!

does that make me crazy?

i love it!

Super cute. Loved it!

ooh.

Did she miss the insult?

This is turning out to be quite entertaining! I'm very happy, as the last few fanfics I have read were really darn dissapointing. :)  I'll be reading this with intent, thanks!

great comeback kagome!

I like this story and eagerly look for your updates. Thanks for being quick about them :)

Sessh, you need to find some actually loyal servants.

I just finished reading up to your current chapter and the story is good so far. There are some grammar errors and incorrect verbage but, overall I think you're doing a good job.  The story is a bit cliche, but that isn't to say it isn't worth reading. :) I'll continue looking forward to your next post, and am anticipating that unexpected twist. Rin is definitely a sweetheart in this story.

Wow thank you for a very impressive first posting on this story