Um... Ah~Un doesn't have wings.... They use youkai orbs under their feet to fly... Just thought I'd mention that...
I still love the story! I'm glad to see Sesshoumaru taking action, I wonder if he can actually help or if this thing really does just have to run it's course.
I'm looking forward to more!
~Starfyre
Sesshoumaru to the rescue!
Dute dute dute DO!
lol
Can't wait for more more more!
Great Chapter!
update again soon please!
~Starfyre
OMG is he going through the well!? Whatever you do Sesshomaru I hope you save Kags soon~! Please update soon please :-)
Go Sesshou!
I can't help but wonder how long it will take her to figure out that these are dreams and are not actually real?
I look forward to Sesshoumaru's thoughts!
Can't wait for more!
~Starfyre
great update! I'm looking forward to Kagome and Sesshoumaru figuring out where they stand in their relationship.
Update again soon, and Happy Easter
~Starfyre
loving the chapter, i am enjoying the twists just as much as the insight to sesshomarus thoughts. keep it coming hun. sorry for the crappy appearing review. my phone apparently doesnt believe.in auto correct while on dokuga. lmao
Poor Sesshomaru. ?.
hmm... I wonder how long it will take for Kagome to over come this spell.
I'm sure Naraku planned for her coming back, he would have to know that she wouldn't stay away, I wonder what Sesshoumaru will do? Will he try to find a way to help her?
I can't wait for you next update!
~Starfyre
Sesshomaru-sama!
Save her!
Kill Inuyasha!
Is there no more Rin?
What's wrong?
What's that stupid sesshomarus guard guy doing to her?
Stupid Inu!!
STUPID!!!
Theri strongest link huh?
Well, Naraku's not stupid, but he has to know thatInuyasha's going to go after her, right?
why wouldn't she ever know?
Love it!!!! Please update soon~!!!
oh!
gathering to talk about kagome!
this is awesome!
he is good.
way better than inuyasha.
though i suppose that is to be expected.
Zero (Chapter 18) - Fri 25 Jan 2013
I was going to wait to review until after I'd caught up since I haven't seen any big typos or problems that need pointed out. Only I couldn't help myself. Shippo and Rin are so cute in this chapter. You said Shippo was the one who was going to 'be strong' but it came over more as Rin being strong. Shippo was just completely cute >< Well done. Imma keep going now ^__^
~Zero
she can't leave!
she's going to leave?
she can't leave!
she's going to leave?
you aren't going to discouraged kagome!
she's going to destroy you one day!
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