I just found this story & I really hope you continue this or I will be extremely sad if you don't. I really want to know what is going to happen after this with all the characters but mostly Sessh & Kagome
Thank you for bringing this story back! I was looking for it and was sad it disappeared. I like the revisions as well; I think a university setting is more appropriate for the relationships and the kind of classes they take. I don't really like Kanna's portrayal - I think I'm just not used to her being anything but quiet and reserved. The scene with Kagura in the Starbucks felt a little over the top - especially the part where it escalated into a high speed chase -, but it was just too funny. Though a tad fast, I like how Seshomaru's and Kagome's relationship is progressing. I do hope there will be more heart-warming moments, like when they were studying - not overly so, but spaced out in a balanced way. I'm really looking forward to the next update. I'm also curious when it will be revealed what Kagome is. Keep up the great work, but don't feel you have to rush in updating - great literature takes time. Hopefully it won't be a long wait for the next chapter though :)
kissthehentai (Chapter 7) - Tue 11 Jan 2011
So so so funny and damn hot to boot. Despite your grammatical errors, I am enthralled by the plot of the story. Plus, I want Sess and Kags to get it on ASAP =) Can't wait for the next update!
skira (Chapter 7) - Mon 10 Jan 2011
Your story is amazing. I can't wait for the next update.
Diane (Chapter 7) - Mon 10 Jan 2011
Was really happy to see an update even if it's not exactly a continuation of the original story. There are a few things I've noticed throughout the chapters, lack of punctuation at the end of sentences, you only seem to use ? & ! regularly & you don't always capitalize the 1st word of a sentence & proper names, peoples names are ALWAYS capitalized along with place names like Tokyo Tower, street names, etc. You also have name issues, I've seen at least 3 different spellings of Sesshomaru, sometimes you have Sh at the beginning & when they're talking to Kohana in chapter 2 or 3 it's wildly misspelled. You have 2 or 3 spellings of Inuyasha too, the s seems to migrate randomly around the h & at least once a few other letters. Other than that Kikyou is missing her 2nd k in the drunk scene in chapter 7. Hope this is helpful.
monk-miko (Chapter 7) - Mon 10 Jan 2011
I have been waiting a long time for this to be updated. I was so excited to see the update I started to scream xD. You are doing a great job and I hope to see another chapter very soon. This is getting very interesting and I was so happy to see the new changes that you have made. I liked the story either way you written it, that's how good this story is. I'm glad your back and keep up the wonderful work.
stars (Chapter 6) - Thu 08 Apr 2010
please updata
i really hope that you are going to continue this story cuz its awesome!!
JadedDeviant (Chapter 6) - Thu 21 Jan 2010
You know what you should do? UPDATE!!! :P Love it!! Keep it up!
annette (Chapter 4) - Fri 14 Aug 2009
LOVE the story!! The beasty issues are Great!! Thanks for the story so far! Hope to see it continue!
PLEASE update this story soon! I'm totally hooked to it!
Rocky (Chapter 1) - Tue 03 Feb 2009
I hope that you post a new chapter soon. This is a great story. Please update soon.
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