Keep it coming. Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year!
Teehee, Kagome will be quite surprised to find out Sesshoumaru wants to schedule an appointment with her :o
Samara (Chapter 3) - Sun 23 Dec 2012
I have to say this is one of my fave favorites!!! lol... I just wish your chapters were a bit longer... i am a sucker for a good conversation or two... battle scene?? well anyways, I anticipate another good chapter from you... cant wait for your update... Happy Holidays!!!
Samara (Chapter 2) - Mon 17 Dec 2012
another good one!!! keep up the good work, cant wait for more... hehe, this is a really great, believable way for them to interact... on the edge of my seat with anticipation...
I love the story so far. Update soon!
Calophi (Chapter 2) - Sat 15 Dec 2012
Your story is super cute! I love the idea of Kagome and Rin being penpals to help with Rin's lessons. I can't wait to see how everything develops!
Keep it coming.
Qiwi (Chapter 2) - Sat 15 Dec 2012
Though it's nice to have them together, I would enjoy more epistorial conversation! Keep it coming :)
Izzy (Chapter 2) - Sat 15 Dec 2012
This is cute <3 please continue!
Q-chan (Chapter 1) - Wed 12 Dec 2012
well, this is very interesting. i cant wait for more letter.
I am so loving this idea. I am always fond of stories that revolve around writing. Must be the writer in me O.o. I cant wait for more!!! Dont make me wait to long D:!
I am enjoying the story so far, as well as the possibilities this story has to offer. I look forward to reading the next installment.
One small critique: Please remember to capitalize people's names. :)
Please update soon!
inu :D
This is something different and I must say I rather enjoyed it. Please update soon!!
This story sounds interesting and funny, keep it coming.
Samara (Chapter 1) - Mon 10 Dec 2012
this is such a great idea... i'm just guessing but this is post naraku right?? i mean sango is prego for a second time and that didnt happen pre naraku soooooo... yeah, just getting my lines straight... cant wait for the next chapter, keep up the good work!!!
lular (Chapter 1) - Mon 10 Dec 2012
I hope you continue this; the first chapter was cute and funny!
For a first time writing this isn't bad. I would just suggest that you be a little more careful with grammatical and spelling errors. There was some inconsistency with capitalization and a few spelling errors as well.
For instance in the first letter Kagome writes to Sesshomaru:
"try not to work yourself to hard"
it should be: "too hard"
Overall this is good start to a first attempt and I think you should keep going!
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