Beautiful beautiful piece! I so hope you will find time and inspiration to update!!! Please?
Very good plot, description and the inu manerism is spot on! Jam getting inspiration from it!
Thx for sharing your talent with us!
Good luck and take care!
Cheers!
Cheryl (Chapter 5) - Thu 02 Oct 2014
oooh i sure hope this continues~! so good!
Eden (Chapter 5) - Wed 28 May 2014
Love this story. WANT MORE!!!!!
loves this one tooo T_T
Oh wow it's been a long times since a story has cause so many emotinal reactions as this story has. You have a beautiful beginning to your story and so hope that you plan to update regularly. I have laughed, winced, blushed, been embarrased, and sadden so far. I love a story that makes me feel a part of it and you have done this so beautifully. You have also stuck to the true personalities of the characters. Not many can porttray Sesshomaru well and I have to say you have. Kagome is soo easy. I myself do not write as I ahve found I don't have the ablilty or words to do so. Therefore I read ALOT. So many stories I have read between here an Fanfiction and there are so few wrtiters that draw their readers in, I was disappointed when there wasn't another chapter!! I can't wait to read more!! Until next time -Inu25
Yes, keep it coming.
Rayne (Chapter 5) - Thu 19 Sep 2013
YESSSSSSSSS!! FIST PUMP!!! hahah ah i was chessing and blushing whilst reading those last bits hehehehe so KAWAII! Please update soon!!
Eris (Chapter 4) - Wed 11 Sep 2013
What I would give to see the look on his face when she puked on his shoes...awesome chapter.
OMG!
You just sullied Sesshy's shoes.. oh the inhumanity!
But priceless >:3
Anywho.. I love the umm.. mating advice? from Sango XD... The poor woman has been corrupted by the big bad pervy monk XD
LOVED IT!
*Falls over laughing*
Eat it!
No
Eat it!
No
*SHoves in face*
*Shoves in face*
FOOD FIGHT!!!!
Seduce him Kagome >:3 Seduce him..
Give that Dog ramen and everything willbe okay
‘Only Sesshomaru could compliment you and demand something in one go.' But you just gotta love him...
Ahh the prego Kagome was cute.. :D... She really had to pee ....
Kagome can't let Sesshy end up like that T.T... Don't cry Sesshy....
oooooooooooooooo
I'm absolutely loving chapter one :D
Inuyasha is such a child -.-
Sesshy ish.. well.. sesshy ^.^
Kagome's finally grew up,
Cant wait to read chapter 2..
So so late, keep it coming.
Samara (Chapter 3) - Mon 19 Aug 2013
OMG... I cannot believe he just did that!!! on the edge of my seat waiting for more of this genius!!
Eris (Chapter 3) - Sat 17 Aug 2013
I hope that you continue with this story sometime soon.
krista (Chapter 3) - Mon 12 Aug 2013
LOVE IT!!!!! It made me cry just to let you know. But i will enjoyed reading and really hope that there will be more in the future!!
very sweet story, love it! looking forward to the next update!
Oh please oh please oh please oh please continue!!! I am just in love with this story and can't wait for more!!!!!
mari (Chapter 3) - Sat 03 Aug 2013
loved the update thanks.
xDori (Chapter 1) - Sat 03 Aug 2013
Ohmygosh, great first chapter!
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