so happy for kagome. please update soon.
You have done well in introducing to the story, and I personally don't think it had moved slow since as you said, you have to set the stage. It's only the second chapter too. :P
Can't wait to find out what happens with this new little family. I wondering if shippo will show up some how too. Seems like the right setting for him to join Kagome in XD
She sounds so cute .. Repeating big words and stuff... Goo head girl... I need more updates...!
-TheNight
Keep it coming.
I love it. Please update soon.
Sesshylovers (Chapter 2) - Fri 23 Nov 2012
ohhhh, I really like how you made the this chapter, I wonder why her formor family abandiond her (sorry can't spell >.<) I am so glad you updated! may you continue writing so nicely :3
Good so far... Keep it up...
-TheNight
sounds like an interesting story. looks like Sumimoko hasn't completely forgiven Taisho. Hopefully Kagome will be the daughter she wants.
Please update soon. I like it and I can't wait to see what happens next,
tiana (Chapter 1) - Wed 21 Nov 2012
i really enjoyed reading this first chapter can't wait for more chapters to come
tiana (Chapter 1) - Wed 21 Nov 2012
i really enjoyed reading this first chapter can't wait for more chapters to come
Jow (Chapter 1) - Tue 20 Nov 2012
This is a great start to your story!!
I like how you've incorporated Kagome into the lives and family of the House of the West!
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