very good, but seems like its already over before it really began.

I love this so much. I wish you kept it going. :) 

This story was very sweet. I wish it had been drawn out longer but this was very satisfying and sweet. Leave it up to Kagome to have steamy kisses with steamy looking men who are so hot hey make steam look cool! Lol one thing I would clarify is the time period and the ways of the land. I thought this was a modern tale and then it was switched up when you mentioned that Sesshomaru watched Kagome leave her hut. Also if it was a very early time period perhaps she would not have flirted the way she did. I don't know I think the way she flirted with him is how some women flirt today- unabashed and unafraid. Anyway great job. :)

that tugged at my heart strings!