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Samara (Chapter 6) - Mon 10 Dec 2012

OMG!!! such a good concept... caint wait to read more!!!


Loveyaa (Chapter 6) - Mon 10 Dec 2012

Hmm...wonder what is happening to Kagome. Is it due to the jewel and why an elemental? Im looking forward to more of the Kagome and Sesshoumaru interactions, especially when Kagome doesn't have Siya as her filter anymore. Did Mia get what was coming to her? I can't wait to see what happens next :)


LoveAndFaith (Chapter 6) - Mon 10 Dec 2012

Keep it coming.


Ali (Chapter 6) - Mon 10 Dec 2012

poor kagoma having to face papa sess lol. i can pitcher every sein in the story. love your story cant waight for the next chapter ;)

 


Koi (Chapter 6) - Mon 10 Dec 2012

Excuse my language For what is to come. What the hell! what a mean Cliffy. I want to know what happens next....how is it possible for her to stay under the water for so long. Is Kagome an elemental demon? I wonder how? I mean I know she and Sai share the same essence, but does that really have anything to do with it??? So many questions!!!! Please update sooooon!


Michelle (Chapter 6) - Mon 10 Dec 2012

Great chapter. I think I will a bit sad to see siya go too. Kagome is strong so I think she can handle it on her own when the time comes.

Up date soon.


gabriele (Chapter 5) - Sun 09 Dec 2012

soooo good cant wait to read more.


snowbird (Chapter 5) - Fri 16 Nov 2012

I'm loving this story.  I'm glad Sesshoumaru knows all about Mai and Siya.  That way Kagome does not have to waste time and effort having to convince him along the way while he mistakenly believes in Mai.  Now he can concentrate on protecting Ichirou and Kagome while getting rid of Mai as his mate.  I'm eager for more.


Kiyoshi_Snow_Leopard_Demon_Assassin (Chapter 5) - Fri 16 Nov 2012

I like it so far and I can't wait for more. 


Sara (Chapter 2) - Fri 16 Nov 2012

You need a beta. Or at least you need to work on your writing, because you have a tendency to change tenses and not use your wording correctly. In some areas you forget to pluralise, in others you don't add an "ed" on the end of a word or you use it in the wrong area and it makes the sentence look odd.


LoveAndFaith (Chapter 5) - Thu 15 Nov 2012

Keep it coming.


sugar0o who lurks (Chapter 5) - Thu 15 Nov 2012

longer, more, update! yussssssssssssssssssssssssss *wiggles update bribery c0okies at you!*


cassandra (Chapter 5) - Thu 15 Nov 2012

I can't wait to see what happens next!


Phyllis (Chapter 5) - Thu 15 Nov 2012

Great chapter!  Glad Sesshomaru didn't try to kill Kagome.  Looking forward to seeing where this all goes!!


Tessitura (Chapter 4) - Thu 15 Nov 2012

This must be the first forced motherhood/turning Kagome into an inu mother I like. Many give very flimsy explanations of breast feeding. I read one that explained it through one type of herb or another.  Really!?  Or even why she came into this mess. Kudos!! As for Kikyo's jealousy, I gathering its for two reasons. Her prejudice of youkai and she is unable to have children. Her superiority complex is peppered throughout the series.  Just because she is knowledgeable doesn’t make her wise or empathic.  Per the series she was a walking golem, using recently departed souls as fuel.  That would be a big no, no.  Kikyo was stopping the cycle of reincarnation thus sinning directly against the Kamis.  Punishment would be dealt swiftly and unmercifully.  InuYasha being the blind dope he is agreeing to stay away. Hope to see more!


Midnight (Chapter 4) - Wed 14 Nov 2012

I like it so far. 


sugar0o who lurks (Chapter 4) - Tue 13 Nov 2012

i feel so teased, i need you to update -nods- like... now :3 *wiggles bribery c0okies at you*


LoveAndFaith (Chapter 4) - Tue 13 Nov 2012

Keep it coming.


SessQueen (Chapter 4) - Tue 13 Nov 2012

reallly liked the last few chapters. im excitied for the next one.


sarah duffy (Chapter 4) - Tue 13 Nov 2012

this story is getting amazing. i cant wait for more.

 


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