All three chapters are good, keep it coming.
How God Created Mother
Good took the fragrance of a flower, The majesty of a tree, The gentleness of a morning a dew The calm of a quiet sea, The beauty of a twilight hour The soul of a starry night The laughter of the rippling brook, The grace of a bird in flight, Then God fashioned from these things A creation like no other, And when His masterpiece was through, He called it simply...MOTHER.
Happy Mother's Day!
i re-read the whole thing. i forgot which one this is, but halfway i remembered "oh! this is the one with the flamboyant dancer! (altough he isn't gay) " great job yet again and please continue :)
First, I want to say that I like how nice, and (almost) smooth the way their relationship grows, though it was a bit too fast in my opinion. Well, I think maybe it is because of Sesshoumaru's instinct, ne? I guess it is allowed, lol.
Next is, I want to know what happened to the so-called Inuyasha's pack after Kagome left. There is no way Inuyasha didn't come screaming and demanding Kagome to go back or something... he didn't seem as a conniving bas- um, I mean, male like Naraku to plan to get Kagome back.
Now, about Bankotsu and this mysterious being. Is it Naraku? But I feel like it isn't... and to top it off, did Akane work to this person? She was the one who gave the pearls, after all. Hopefully, Manabu's jewel will give her more protection in the future, although I am curious about how they met for the first time.
I hope you can update soon,
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I do wonder who's leading who... Sesshomaru seems to enjoy being led around. XDD
Bwahahahaha!! I bet he enjoys doing that just to mess with her. XD
Haha... love this one...
very nice chapter...
All five chapters are great, keep it coming.
Sarah (Chapter 188) - Fri 01 Nov 2013
Chapter 188 is my least favorite chapter it just seems ridiculous he went to the future got all this art and studied the artist and taught it to other teachers at the palace
Nice, keep it coming.
Keep it coming.
Ah! The hilarity. Great way of incorperating the prompt, and even adding the little bits of history in there!
Definitely enjoyed it. Great job.
Poor guard, keep it coming.
And I do believe I am hooked...I think it was the fact that the chapter ended with Sesshoumaru's evil grin...I just have to read ahead to see what is going to happen!!
ROFL! I couldn't help but feel for the unfortunate guard... I'm glad you had fun with my review, Missy! XD
Awwe, they reached completion together, looking into one another's eyes! How sweet! XD
Those eyes of his, yep, burning lava!! *swoons*
Alii (Chapter 186) - Sun 15 Sep 2013
^.^ Love the update! More please!
I will not take eyes away from you Sesshoumaru, keep it coming.
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