Reviews for Mine, Only Mine by Selena

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LoveAndFaith (Chapter 10) - Tue 25 Dec 2012

It's been a month and four weeks since you last updated, I'm glad your back. Great chapter, keep it coming. Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year!


LoveAndFaith (Chapter 10) - Tue 25 Dec 2012

It's been a months and four weeks since you last updated, I'm glad your back. Great chapter, keep it coming. Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year!


Sessygurl (Chapter 10) - Tue 25 Dec 2012

Possesive much. lol


Sesshomaru's Night (Chapter 10) - Tue 25 Dec 2012

Tsk tsk sesshomaru, you know kagome is head strong... 


LoveAndFaith (Chapter 9) - Thu 22 Nov 2012

Happy Thanksgiving to you and your family, keep it coming.


Sesshomaru's Night (Chapter 9) - Thu 22 Nov 2012

How about a little drama about the momma?

-TheNight


Blow and Pop (Chapter 8) - Thu 15 Nov 2012

I don't want to be really rude or anything. But if "forbidden" means prohibited and "un" is a negative prefix, wouldn't "unforbidden" mean "not forbidden" which is synonym to allowable?

Please correct me if I'm wrong. Plot is good though, exept for this. Maybe I misunderstood something  


LoveAndFaith (Chapter 8) - Wed 14 Nov 2012

Keep it coming.


Sesshomaru's Night (Chapter 8) - Tue 13 Nov 2012

I am sensing this theme is fimilar.... A movie perhaps? Anyways I think that all this just got real... 

Satan though? He was he that good and your were so in love that we got a child out of it? Shaking my head.

Updates soon?!

-TheNight-


cassandra (Chapter 8) - Tue 13 Nov 2012

I wonder what Kagome really is. Is she a half demon? I can't to wait and see! Update soon!


Sesshomaru's Night (Chapter 7) - Sun 11 Nov 2012

And so the realization comes to Kagome. Hard.

Great job. Updates soon?!

-TheNight-


LoveAndFaith (Chapter 7) - Sun 11 Nov 2012

Keep it coming.


Bianka (Chapter 7) - Sun 11 Nov 2012

at the end when it said "So, she run" its suposed to be ran instead and ur really good keep it coming :D


Sesshomaru's Night (Chapter 6) - Sat 10 Nov 2012

Ohhh.... Leaving us guessing.. 

Updates soon

-TheNight-


Sarah (Chapter 6) - Sat 10 Nov 2012
Kind of got confused in this chapter is her mom really there or was it like a flashback or something

LoveAndFaith (Chapter 6) - Sat 10 Nov 2012

Keep it coming.


BlackspotMaggie (Chapter 5) - Tue 06 Nov 2012

Hey! =D

I like very much your story!! =D

 

Please keep posting long chapters.. Please!! =D

 

 


LoveAndFaith (Chapter 5) - Sun 04 Nov 2012

Keep it coming.


Silverfurred (Chapter 5) - Sat 03 Nov 2012

This has great potential....but would be better if there weren't glaring grammar errors. The last chapter was fine. But some of the ones preceding could use some work. My main point would be to stick to either present or past tense.  

 

I wanna see where this goes. Please continue. :)


cassandra (Chapter 5) - Sat 03 Nov 2012

Doomed? Hm? I wonder why she's doomed. I can't wait to see what happens!


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