It's been a month and four weeks since you last updated, I'm glad your back. Great chapter, keep it coming. Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year!

It's been a months and four weeks since you last updated, I'm glad your back. Great chapter, keep it coming. Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year!

Possesive much. lol

Tsk tsk sesshomaru, you know kagome is head strong... 

Happy Thanksgiving to you and your family, keep it coming.

How about a little drama about the momma?

-TheNight

I don't want to be really rude or anything. But if "forbidden" means prohibited and "un" is a negative prefix, wouldn't "unforbidden" mean "not forbidden" which is synonym to allowable?

Please correct me if I'm wrong. Plot is good though, exept for this. Maybe I misunderstood something  

Keep it coming.

I am sensing this theme is fimilar.... A movie perhaps? Anyways I think that all this just got real... 

Satan though? He was he that good and your were so in love that we got a child out of it? Shaking my head.

Updates soon?!

-TheNight-

I wonder what Kagome really is. Is she a half demon? I can't to wait and see! Update soon!

And so the realization comes to Kagome. Hard.

Great job. Updates soon?!

-TheNight-

Keep it coming.

at the end when it said "So, she run" its suposed to be ran instead and ur really good keep it coming :D

Ohhh.... Leaving us guessing.. 

Updates soon

-TheNight-

Keep it coming.

Hey! =D

I like very much your story!! =D

Please keep posting long chapters.. Please!! =D

Keep it coming.

This has great potential....but would be better if there weren't glaring grammar errors. The last chapter was fine. But some of the ones preceding could use some work. My main point would be to stick to either present or past tense.  

I wanna see where this goes. Please continue. :)

Doomed? Hm? I wonder why she's doomed. I can't wait to see what happens!