I wish you would update this story soon Please! This chapter is pretty funny and sexy at the same time!

i eagerly await the next chapter!

I love the 50 shades of grey books. This first chapter is awesome. I am hanging onto the edge of my seat waiting for your next update so please update as soon as you can.

Great work!!!! I loved the trilogy and was hoping some would do if! Yay you. Can't wait to read what happens next.

This story sounds interesting, keep it coming.

Damn. I've read fifty shades trilogy and became totally enamored to it. I absolutely love it. Especially Christian so you must write this one as good as the trilogy. 'kay? :))

 good first chapter. watch your grammar

I love the 50 shades of grey books! I've read them all. I'm looking forward to reading more chapters.

I have read the 50 Shades books, and I have to say that I am so.excited.for.this!  Already the first Chapter makes me happy, can't wait for the others :)

I knew this day would come. :) I read the 50 Shades of Grey Trilogy a while back, and I greatly enjoyed reading them, E.L. James is an artist. I'm actually very glad someone decided to do this.

Love the direction it's going in, the twists you've put in are wonderful.

Please update soon!

- MC