Really good story 

You've done a good job building up the setting for your story to take place in. I'm not usually partial to teenage characters, but your depiction seems accurate for someone in that stage of development lol. You also have some good description in there. All in all, good job!

I hope that Sesshamoru sets Kouga and Inuyasha straight! They cannot just say that Kagome will be their mate without even asking her family for permission to court her. They did not even ask her to court! How disgraceful! I feel sorry for Inuyash's beast. Can you give us some more background on that? Will Inuyasha Ever reconcile with his beast? Can you describe Kagome's beast some more? I have a vague picture of a black dog with stripes on it's cheeks that goes all the way down it's sides. Is that correct? Please continue the story. Will Kagome somehow avoid her Mom's fate to give all of her power to her daughter and, in a sense, become helpless? Of course, being a hanyo, she will not be so defenceless like her Mom was....... Can you elaborate on how she died? Was it in battle or old age? Thank you!

Loving it, keep it coming. 

How insensitive could someone be? To say something like that on the day her mother died? That's harsh. Inuyasha's beast needs to come out a lot to teach something about himself despite him having Tetsusaiga. Better yet, he should have dreams of him coming out. 

i love this story! i hope both sesshoumaru beat inu's ass...and kouga's too because we dont want him to be left out, right?

All four chapters, keep it coming.

~~Awwww Inuyasha, that little jerk! D:< I hope she teaches him good! lol More please! :D

TY for coming back and updating

It's been six months and since you last updated, I'm glad your back. Great chapter, please update the next chapters soon and not in months. Keep it coming.

Keep it coming.

Would love to read your story, but the font is so small, I can hardly see it.  No matter what I do, it won't get bigger. Ironically, it's the same size as font in this review.  I don't know why! :(

I love where this story is going. The chemistry between the characters it great! I cant wait to see what happens next.

Poor lil Kags, I hope there is some full blooded youkai vying after Kagome's attentions, maybe then Sesshomaru will wake up?

Keep it coming.

I like it. I would love to read more.

I love it, and cannot wait for more!

~Sandreline

This story sounds interesting, keep it coming.