Very nice! Very nice indeed!
As always, great work my dear!
Wow, I don't usually like oneshots, as I crave more, but this was remarkable! I loved how you played up the rivalry between the brothers, and the love between the demon and the miko. I especially love the buildup where she takes off the layers of her kimono. Beautifully done! I wish there was more, but you've done so well with just one. Great job!