Oh my god! Good Job......now this is waht I call embarassing. But I suppose the embarassment would've bee nworse if Sesshomaru's perverted father walked in on them....xDD
I'm happy to know that you're back and alive! XD I still love your stories!
THAT WAS HOTT!!!! LOL I LOVED HOW U MADE SESSHOMARU OOC USUALLY I DONT UNTIL FURTHER ON IN A STORY BUT OMG THE WAY U PORTRAYED HIM IN THIS FIC WAS PERFECT FOR THE FIC AND IT MADE IT SOOOOOO GREAT HEHE OH AND I LOVED THE LEMON ALL I CAN SAY IS WOW THATS HOTT LOL UR REALLY A GREAT WRITER I HOPE U UPDATE SOON MUCH LOVE
Angel (Chapter 6) - Tue 05 May 2009
this is really good
lol. I totally know what you mean about being disappoint with the lack of reviews. I just have to let you know I've enjoyed all of your chapters- but especially 2! I re-read that one all the time. But yeah, you're a good writer and I enjoy your varied takes on everyones favorite couple.
Emu (Chapter 5) - Tue 05 May 2009
hey i like the story but you should make it more clear. like in that last chapter we don't really know what happened other than kagome signed a contract that made her a sex slave but what did she think she was signing up for
Micah caran Damien (Chapter 6) - Tue 05 May 2009
That was soooo good. Loved it. Only how many guys out there would turn down a blow job? None that I know. Way to be gallant, Sess.
i like it please continue
I would give it many thumbs up however I don't have that many thumbs. ;P
Angel (Chapter 5) - Fri 01 May 2009
thumbs up
Daanng (Chapter 5) - Fri 01 May 2009
Your stories are great!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Don't worry, we all like 'em.
Love it. It's really good.
I like it =) more plot would have made chapter 2 even better, but it's still good =) can't wait for more
Both chapters were way cute, and ideas weren't half bad. In the second chapter, theres a lot of plot missing though- they barely talk, then all of a sudden, their fucking. Not that I mind the smut ^_~, but a bit more plot between the two would have rocked. Also you had a few typos- "he" instead of "him", and "she", instead of "her" were the two most common problems. All together, pretty good. I give 'em a 7/10 and a 6/10.
GrneyedMinx (Chapter 2) - Mon 18 Aug 2008
Oh, the steamy "ness"!
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