No problem Sena updated when you can, why did you stop it there it was just getting good, keep it coming.
Well Hiro, it looks like you have been x out of the race for Kagome's heart. I am slightly on edge about finding Hiro. What will his reaction be? Will he and Sesshomaru fight to the death? Will Kagome get her revenge? My head is swimming with many questions. Anyway, I am totally in grossed in your story. It is exciting and just keeps getting better. I need more updates. This whole cliff hanger thing is not working out home skillet...
Update soon!! My curiosity can only go so long unanswered.
-TheNight-
HEY! What did you go and do that for! It was just getting good and you go and stop! Update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!
Lumi (Chapter 1) - Tue 16 Oct 2012
Since most of the information here is similar to the end of the series already, you probably could have incorporated what was left into the story as it went, as needed, for greater effect. As it stands though, not a bad prologue for setting the scene, though there are a few word-usage errors.
Poor Aito was only try to help Kagome. hehe Sesshoumaru didn't like it though. Loved the chapter.
Pricila (Chapter 7) - Thu 04 Oct 2012
Very well done!
It did not kill the story at all! I loved it! Please write more soon; I am very eager to continue reading this story.
~Sandreline
Very good chapter
Keep it coming.
Guilty is charged! Sesshomarus in love. Sesshomarus in love!! Haha I almost hope they dont find Hiro but at the same time I do. That is crazy. Im speechless. It was amazing!!
Update soon!!
-TheNight-
This story just keeps getting better all the time! Update soon!
Oh my God!! It was great!!! Now I can't stop thinking about the information he told her. And Sesshomaru, your not slick. You love her!!!
Update soon!!!
-TheNight-
Keep it coming.
Ooohh I think Sesshomaru's falling for her!
^_^ I will wait as long as I have to as long as I get to read more at some point. Loved the chapter.
Unaccpetable!!! Leaving me hanging like this. Smh. You better update soon.... Love it!!!!
-TheNight-
Vel (Chapter 5) - Wed 26 Sep 2012
Nice update(s)! But poor Kai :p Anyways, I was just going to suggest you try to break your paragraphs up a bit more. Sometimes they seem a little like walls of text on the screen, and it does make a difference when you separate them. Kagome... Finally you face the consequences of running away :D
I can't wait to see what happens next! I suspect that those three new demons have something to do with Kagome's past. I can't wait to see what Sesshomaru's reaction will be when he finds Kagome.
You can't just leave it there. I want to know hwat happens next. I love the sotry by the way. I can't wait to read more.
I'm glad Kagome is ok, I can't wait for Sesshomaru and Kagome to meet, keep it coming.
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