Wow! Great start! You definitely have my attention.  I like that there is immediately going to be a power struggle between Inuyasha and Sesshoumaru. I can’t wait to find out what happened to cause the girl to be covered in blood. Wonderful start to your first story.

" Sango handed her a bottle of Carbon dioxide to kill any kind of infections and gauze to wrap around her stomach."  In this sentence I think you mean hydrogen peroxide?

A really good beginning with simple introductions to each character and a bit of their personalities.

I was a little confused as to who said "We shall stop here," because it was followed by "The Demon Slayer Sango..." 

Also, I think you meant Hydrogen Peroxide for cleaning wounds ^-^.  

Again, a really good start and I'm curious who this new hanyou is, what she is and how she figures into this story. 

Hello Angel or Lillian, I must say you have a great start. The first chapter described the new set up and changes to the group. I would like to know, maybe, how Sesshomaru was convinced to join the Inuyasha group.  But anyways, the first chapter definitely caught my attention! *throws sprinkles of encouragement*

I love the introduction of this new character. She is hurt and a hanyou. Hmmm...will she be paired with Inuyasha? She brings a lot of mystery and potential to this plot/story.

Keep up the wonderful work. I found that you kept true to the characters of the Inuyasha group. Well done!