Reviews for Apotheosis by Lyra

No Uta (Chapter 5) - Thu 21 Aug 2014

Oh my goodness!  Another amazing fic! I've recently read your Alpha & adored every minute of it. This one here. Goodness,  has left me breathless. I've never read anything like this. Bravo! 

Wunderberry (Chapter 5) - Wed 18 Jun 2014

Man, I love this story. 

I really like stories where Rin has gone to the dark side. In the series, she is an innocent little girl. But every little girl grows up, and they're typically not as innocent as they were when they were young. I understand why so many portray Rin this way, because this is familiar and this is the Rin we came to know in canon. But when they portray a grown up Rin, why is it is expected for her to still be the sweetest little girl ever?

Update soon.

LoveAndFaith (Chapter 5) - Tue 17 Jun 2014

Sailor Moon new anime will premiere on July 5. Great, keep it coming.

What Makes A Dad

God took the strength of a mountain,
The majesty of a tree,
The warmth of a summer run,
The calm of a quiet sea,
The generous soul of nature,
The comforting arm of night,
The wisdom of the ages,
The power of the eagle's flight,
The joy of a morning in spring,
The faith of a mustard seed,
The patience of eternity,
The depth of a family need,
Then God combined these qualities,
When there was nothing more to add,
He knew His masterpiece was complete,
And so, He called it...Dad.

Happy Father's Day!

Halcali (Chapter 1) - Mon 15 Apr 2013
Beautiful. I'm lost for words, honestly. I've got chills (the good kind) and the titles, man. 'When the bough breaks' just sort of punches me in the gut, and Rin creeps me out in that chapter. I can only imagine the lengths she (and Inuyasha too) would do and I'm scared for Sesshoumaru and Kagome. Thank you for updating.

Azuka (Chapter 4) - Mon 15 Apr 2013

I LOVED IT!!! OMG I WANTZ MOAR!! You're so amazing!! YOU'RE MY HERO!! Seriously though, amazing! You're fantastic and I desire MOAR! 

~ Crackz the whip of Madness and DOOM ~ <3 <3 <3 ^_^

sugar0o (Chapter 4) - Mon 15 Apr 2013

yEy! crae-crae smutted! now to the fireworks!

LoveAndFaith (Chapter 4) - Sun 14 Apr 2013

It's been three months since you updated, I'm glad your back. Thank you for both chapters, there both great. Please update the next chapters soon not in months. Keep it coming.

Azuka (Chapter 3) - Tue 05 Mar 2013


-dancez in her happeh place- !!!! <3 <3 <3

KouseiJL (Chapter 3) - Sun 20 Jan 2013

 Incredible! Subtlety and blatentcy in one potent mixture! I can't wait to see where you take this next!

Luna C. (Chapter 3) - Sat 19 Jan 2013

Ahhh jealousy is an ugly emotion! Nothing good is gonna come to Rin and Inuyasha! >.<

LoveAndFaith (Chapter 3) - Sat 19 Jan 2013

It's been three months and three weeks since you last updated, I'm glad your back. Great chapter, keep it coming. Happy New Year!

sugar0o (Chapter 3) - Sat 19 Jan 2013

Rin;s a dirty hookerface! U8<

Emma (Chapter 2) - Sun 30 Sep 2012

love! <3

LoveAndFaith (Chapter 2) - Sun 23 Sep 2012

This story sounds interesting, keep it coming.

Drianax (Chapter 2) - Sun 23 Sep 2012

Killer story so long will the story be?  I hope it is a long chapter/drabble.  So please extend this great fic!

sugar0o (Chapter 2) - Sun 23 Sep 2012

hahaha i got all excited thinking there was a chapter 3 :p MORE woman! *cracks whip*

Kayelyn (Chapter 2) - Sun 23 Sep 2012

Hmm...yes, that is another interesting point. For so long, Sesshomaru has always been there for Rin, saving her from Naraku, falls, sickness, and even death-twice. To her, he is no mere male, but a savior, a god, and she loves him unequivocablly and without bounds. He should know of her longing, acknolwedge and accept it, but when he doesn't it accept and chooses another, it comes off as the ultimate betrayel of her love, of her faith in him. This paints a very disturbing picture, a true descent into madness and not just some petty need to make Kagome jealous or Sesshomaru worry. Yet, she doesn't realize that by her actions she is only driving him further and further away, making it impossible for him to be anything to her. 

And Inuyasha...Oh, Inuyasha. He is still so angry and bitter with the brother who has it all. Sesshomaru knew their father, is a lord, is a full blood, the respect of the youkai nation, and has the girl who shared a soul with his Kikyou. Though his obsession isn't as fanatical as Rin's, it is just as disturbing. He is willing to use a child (even if she is willing even if he is not aware of that fact) to strike out at his brother, to twist her and use her to cause him pain. He is slowly becoming something he hated and fought against for so long, something very much like Naraku. I guess it's true that the need to love and feel love can make monsters of us all. It seems to be a very apt saying for the two of them. This is a terrifyingly stunning depiction of broken minds and descents into madness.

I cannot wait to see what happens next.

DescendingFrost (Chapter 1) - Sun 23 Sep 2012

Oh my--this will certainly be interesting! I am a little frightened if we are being completely honest right now. <<

Kayelyn (Chapter 1) - Sun 23 Sep 2012

I like how realistic this situation is. In all likely hood, as Rin aged and Sesshomaru didn't she would begin to see him less as a father/brother figure and start to see him as a male, a very hot male. Add their close proximity to one another and it's easy to see how she could start to envision a life where she is truly with him. Fifteen can be a hard time on a girl, especially  dealing with unfufilled first love, something Kagome knows all to well. It would be nice to see them bond over it, but it seems that Rin is going to go a wee bit Fatal Attraction. 

Can't wait to see how it all plays out!

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