A smut deserving of the name! It certainly wasn't the darkest sex I've ever read, but it really was a new experience, to read KAGOME of all people being so active a participant in what would surely be some very painful sex. 
I also found your writing to be really quite good - very few grammatical or spelling errors, which is something I really appreciate. There's been many a time that I haven't finished a story because it was getting too frustrating to have to make corrections in my head as I was reading. 
Good job, in all!  
      
I lived this!!! I've never seen kagome as a dark lover, always the timid, sometimes shy and surely passionate, but not dark. Amazing. Definitely going on my favorites! 
      
   
   
 
 
 
										 
									
									
																										
								
								
								
																								
															
													
					
				
								
				
				
			
				
				
		
				
	
			
			
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