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KShadeslady (Chapter 24) - Sun 16 Nov 2014

The scenes with Miroku and Sango were really wonderful. It was written and woven into the story beautifully. I really like the idea of Yasuhiro as a kelpie. Certainly there must be an Asian version of kelpies somewhere. Most legends are universal even if they wear different clothes. Looking forward to seeing how it all works out. 


KShadeslady (Chapter 21) - Sat 15 Nov 2014

This story just keeps getting better. Now we have a few more curves thrown in. 


KShadeslady (Chapter 16) - Thu 13 Nov 2014

That was quite nice and very steamy. Loved this chapter. Okay I usually restrain my self from grammar rants but this one seems to be a recurring problem with a lot of fic writers. Bare is like bare skin or bare your soul to someone. Bear is to carry something, like a child. This one gets mixed up a lot. Oh spelling error: complaint is like complaining about something; she had no complaint about the room. Compliant is to what you meant when Kagome'a body became soft against Sesshomaru's chest. I know you are done writing and editing and I won't do another grammar rant...I promise. 


KShadeslady (Chapter 15) - Thu 13 Nov 2014

Great chapter! I love Rin and I always love it when she's in the story. Love the interplay between our favorite couple and how they are progressing. 


KShadeslady (Chapter 12) - Thu 13 Nov 2014

Chap 12-14: I really enjoyed how you have the different side stories going on. 


KShadeslady (Chapter 11) - Wed 12 Nov 2014

The last two chapters have been fun to read. Her interaction with Haru and getting used to a little pampering is sweet. I really like the slow interplay between Sessh and Kagome. Not too rushed and nicely building. 


KShadeslady (Chapter 9) - Wed 12 Nov 2014

I'm really enjoying this story. The side story with Sai is interesting and I'm looking forward to how you develop it. Loved the stalking of his prey in this chapter. 


VivWolf (Chapter 50) - Thu 06 Nov 2014

Ok, read this story all the way through, from start to finish in four days....So I've been thoroughly distracted from school work. Now that I've finished this well written, captivating story I hope to return to the land of the responsible and finish my work. Until I start one of your other works,

 

JA NE!


zheniah (Chapter 50) - Thu 30 Oct 2014

I love this story all though it seamead to jump from one part to another i srill liked it 2 thumgs up for a great story.


Seluna Maru (Chapter 34) - Wed 29 Oct 2014

Ha this writer has awesome guts. I read the AN to the end. Lol I love her officially. I wonder if maybe Yasuhiro might end up with Haru instead. As long as Sesshomaru gets his girl, its all good in my hood. I just hope Miroku learns a lesson


LoveAndFaith (Chapter 50) - Thu 09 Oct 2014

This story was awesome and amazing, and it had a beautiful ending!


DeathDagger (Chapter 50) - Sat 04 Oct 2014

Awwwwww!!! Its over:-( Good story...


DeathDagger (Chapter 16) - Sat 04 Oct 2014

She better stop denying all that sexy!


xoMIA ;) (Chapter 50) - Wed 01 Oct 2014

Awe, I'm so sad it's over, but it was wonderful. Beautiful story!!!


TKE (Chapter 50) - Tue 30 Sep 2014

I enjoyed each and every chapter!!!! Great story!!!


Aryos (Chapter 50) - Tue 30 Sep 2014

Beautiful ending! I love it. I am sad I won't be able wait patiently for the next chapter. Lol looking forward to your next story!!! ;)


elizabeth (Chapter 50) - Tue 30 Sep 2014

i really enjoyed this story . the  very cute end


elizabeth (Chapter 50) - Tue 30 Sep 2014

i really enjoyed this story . the  very cute end


elizabeth (Chapter 50) - Tue 30 Sep 2014

i realli enjoyed this story . the  very cute end


Wynter89 (Chapter 50) - Tue 30 Sep 2014

This is so sad!  I always looked forward to an update.  I would drop what I was doing and read.  It was a fantastic story!  One of my all time favourites!  I look forward to reading more of your works. 

Excuse me, I'm going to sulk in a corner.  


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