Just a note, quotations typically belong in their own paragraph and you should try to keep your paragraph formatting a bit smaller to avoid the "block of text" look.
This was great and HOT!!!
Yukia (Chapter 1) - Sat 15 Sep 2012
oh a touchy touchy first chapter! i love it
starting off with mating first other than them trying to "love" each other first
great! if you would continue i would be so pleased!
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