OooOooO so dramatic! I love it, I can't wait for more.
Kaitlyn (Chapter 27) - Sat 22 Sep 2012
(go go power rangers, also transformers, roll out)
Zalika (Chapter 26) - Fri 21 Sep 2012
I love a worried Sesshomaru!!!! And I love how you update in bulk...can't wait!
poor kagome. hope things go alright!
I know this was supposed to be a serious chapter, but visualizing Sesshoumaru calling his Daddy, I mean I pictured him standing in the courtyard yelling, just made me laugh.
Chaos (Chapter 26) - Fri 21 Sep 2012
You're story is amazing! I'm sad in a way that I only just found it, and also sad because I have no more chpaters to read! Keep up the amazing work :)
Kaitlyn (Chapter 24) - Thu 20 Sep 2012
awesome. I really like your story progession, and I'm super excited to see how this all will move into the future. I want to see adult!Sesshomau and adult!Shippo!
Great story so far! I'm really interested to see how everything plays out. I'm assuming Sesshomaru and Kagome eventualy end up together and I can tell you I've been speculating now for hours how you're going to make that happen! I look forward to seeing future installments.
V/r,
Ladyfifi
Lovely story so far. I thought after the second chapter that you were going to make it a story about Kagome and Sesshoumaru's father being together and Sesshoumaru being her step son. Really love it and you've developed the characters really well. I'm also glad to see that Sesshoumaru's mother is not portrayed badly. I can't wait to see how the romance over the years develops for Kagome and Sesshoumaru. Maybe before Sesshoumaru comes to an age when they can be together, Kagome hooks up with Koga or Miroku. Excitied for the next chapter. Keep on doing what your doing.
I forgot to add this to my previous review. I'd love to see Shippo grow up with his parents alive and becoming good friends with Sesshoumaru and Kagome. Maybe even giving Sesshoumaru some good natured (but not serious) romantic competition for Kagome when they're grown. Kitsunes are pranksters and his plan could be to make Sesshoumaru declare his feelings for her, for if he was dragging his feet for some reason. This would be another different approach on the Shippo character.
I just love your unusual and different approach to this story. It's always refreshing to read a story with a plot that's not overused. I'm not putting down re-used plots because some of them are developed into beautiful stories. It's fascinating that as young as he is, he's already mentally marked her as his future mate.
Kaitlyn (Chapter 20) - Mon 17 Sep 2012
Let him live!
Loving this story! And I like the idea of Shippo having his Dad around, it would do him good to have someone to teach him the tradition of why they protect the Shrine. I think since the dynamics of the story watch our Youkai friends grow over a period fo time, it would be especially nice to see their families still connected with them for a while.
I look forward to more adventures!
Maryssa (Chapter 20) - Mon 17 Sep 2012
way to go kags show them wat ur made of lol
another great chapter of the story!! make his pa LIVE!! i vote for Shippo's pa to LIVE!!
Haven (Chapter 20) - Mon 17 Sep 2012
I like the idea of Shippo having his birth family for once in a story and here's why: When Shippo is orphaned, there is a high probability that Kagome takes on a mothering role and with it certain things play out with an expected note. It's the same with Rin and Sess in stories -- there is a predictable path that just seems to happen. Don't get me wrong, I like Shippo and Rin fine, but since you're asking, I'd like to see something different.
Hope this helps. I'll read regardless of which way you write it...
I love your description of Little Sesshomaru- it's just adorable! I can't wait to read more of the story :D
Haven (Chapter 15) - Sat 15 Sep 2012
That was so ridiculously adorable. Love Sesshy! Thanks for update.
Moooooooooore!
....
Please? ^///^
And thank you!
I haven't seen this done yet so, I find this very interesting. I look forward to your next installment.
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