Hello! Loving the story! I have found a few spots I thought I should let you know about in chapters 7 and 10 you have repeated paragraphs... Keep up the good work otherwise!
I really liked the idea of the story alot...I think it's great that they are all in a band together, and Kagome bumps into them at the ice rink...it is like fate is at work here and one good event after another falls into place and leads Kagome and Sesshoumaru to their happily ever after...when Kagome actually got on the plane and left, I died inside, but knew there was no way on Earth the story was going to end that way...so my faith was renewed...and then when he surprised her on Halloween and said he was her biggest fan, I squealed like a fangirl. And I am not ashamed!! When Sessh told her his feelings for her changed, I had a mini heart attack, and when he asked her to marry him, I was gushing with hapiness...basically, I simply adored the way everyone found love in the end and was so dog-gone happy....overall, I think you did a good job! So keep on writing, and I look forward to reading more of your work.
TKE (Chapter 20) - Mon 16 Sep 2013
I thought this was soooo sweet and I love the story line!
This story was awesome and I enjoyed it!
Nice, keep it coming.
Nice, keep it coming.
This is by FAR the best lemon scene I've read in a really long time! It was well written, so clean , amd I absolutely loved that you refrain from using "dirty talk" which in most cases only mess up the story. Congrats!! Definitely a 10 out off 10 :-)
Great chapter, keep it coming.
Late, keep it coming.
Keep it coming.
oh I really love this last chapter!!!...please update soon, DONT TAKE TOO LONG!!! =]
Keep it coming.
Keep it coming.
Keep it coming.
Eeeh??? O.o What just happened????? I wanna know all the juicy DETZ!!!! PLease update soon!!
Keep it coming.
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