i read this a few yrs back and now i'm doing so again.

this is a great find to read and i love how sess and kags came back to save their family and

the world as they knew it should be.

keep up the great writing. c'ya'

I have enjoyed reading this but I wish it was not over

I've read this story so many times, and I love it every time. I enjoy the character Arthur in the early part of the story. I remember how much The Twist took me by surprise the first time I read the it; I had to double check that I was still reading the same story!

i'm reading this story for a second time and i forgot how good it was. i'm glad it was canon and alternate. seeing sess and inu come together as family was the best part to read. seeing sess and kags go back in time to change the mistakes and save their family and friends was a joy to read. i hope you keep up your writing b/c you are good at it. if you ever finish stories that aren't done i'll be sure to read them and give you my best review possible. loved this story. c'ya'

I wonder why Sesshomaru is in dog form?? I like this story so

loved it. there isnt always a second chance to redo a life once lived. i liked this story b/c a second chance came and it came out alright in the end. keep up the great writing. c'ya'

I liked this story a lot :-)

Okay... I can barely keep up with this.... I like it, do not get me wrong... But there are absolutely no breaks between time gaps, characters are barely introduced and all of a sudden they are congruent to the story.. 

Sess and Kags relationship started so fast and yet they now have a weird patterm.. I cant even describe it. 

I do like the premise of the story.. But it seems careless, the way you have it written. Almost as if you thought up the scene, wrote it without looking back, and posted it without trying to connect it to the rest of the story. 

At least give your readers the courtesy of mentioning time variations.. It gets very confusing when something happens and all of a sudden, for no reason, it is weeks, months or even years later and there is a character we do not know, doing something that makes little sense. 

You could do so much with this idea.. Extend it, make it more detailed.. So that the story could take on a life of its own and flow so much easier than it is now. 

At least think about it.

Best regards,

Stacie

Excellent story!

that was a great story...keep it up

go kagome show them u got the power.....ooooo it looks like kana got a man.....lol

this was in all honesty an awesome story! i was a bit unsure when mentioning what i imagine to be the mafia but it turned out really well. he didn't kill unnessaciyl that SHE/I knew of and he lvoed her with all his heart. it was perfect. mayb now he wont have to turn into the small dog during the winter(?).

I really very much enjoyed this story and thank you very much for writing it. Hope to see more from you soon! :)

Great story, I enjoyed it ^_^

This story is amazing and I enjoyed it.

That was an awesome story, I love the time twist!!!