next chapter please

Sailor Moon new anime will premiere on July 5. Great, keep it coming.

What Makes A Dad

God took the strength of a mountain,
The majesty of a tree,
The warmth of a summer run,
The calm of a quiet sea,
The generous soul of nature,
The comforting arm of night,
The wisdom of the ages,
The power of the eagle's flight,
The joy of a morning in spring,
The faith of a mustard seed,
The patience of eternity,
The depth of a family need,
Then God combined these qualities,
When there was nothing more to add,
He knew His masterpiece was complete,
And so, He called it...Dad.

Happy Father's Day!

next chapter please

I like the storyline and you have some great descriptive detail. I do, however, think you should have more build up in between key scenarios. Some of the important happenings are introduced in rapid succession and out of the blue. For example, when Kagome finds out her father is alive and is of a different species there is no build up or circumstantial evidance that leads up to the final unveiling. It's just "Hello, I am your father and I expect you to accept me." Another part of the story that could use some suspensfull cluing I to is the relationship between Kagome, Sesshomaru, and Rin.

can't wait tell you update.

This makes me think of kagome as a raptor, they were some what birdish xD

I think its spelled tachi? Im not sure…

when i read this chapter, i had to reread that part caues i was like "when did itachi get into Inuyasha??"

Lol i still loved it though :3

next chapter please

Both chapters are so stupid and dumb, April Fools!

Please update whenever you can please.

I hope the lords accept everything or else there will be a war. 

This keeps getting more and more interesting. Great chapter :)

next chapter please

I like the story but sometimes it seems very fast and confusing.

More, keep it coming.

Updates soon I hope

Come it, keep it coming.

next chapter please

Come it, keep it coming.

That is an intersting twist. Great chapter :)