Oh please update soon. I know life can be tough so I'll expect random updates for a very long post interval.
I love the plot of this story. It's excellent as few people choose to transform Kagome, giving her title and orestige, and playing up on the anonymity of her father. As for some constructive criticism, the grammar is a little off. Though your punctuation is excellent, it's the sentence structure that'd I'd suggest working on. I have trouble with it as well. Also, the drastic ooc speech of the character is a little off-putting, as we know Sesshomaru's diction to be clip-toned, refined, and in some cases silence, as his actions speak for him. Also, the cocky attitude Kagome has, it just seems so far from her usual behavior that it gives the story an implausible feel. I don't have any recommendations for changing it, without changing parts of the story, which I'm sure have an excellent plot build up. I'll continue to read as the story is interesting and well thought out.
Don't stop being Awesome!!
~Drax
Sailor Moon new anime has already aired four episodes, If you missed them you can watch them on youtube. Good chapters, keep it coming
(Chapter 5) - Sat 26 Jul 2014
<3 love myself lol. Just re-read all these chapters...and re-edited them. Postings will be up soon. Haha ^_^"
Keep it coming.
lol...Dead monster, that's a new one. I can tell this'll be great. good job :)
Keep it coming.
Keep it coming.
Zeelian (Chapter 2) - Sat 08 Sep 2012
Seems very promosing, a small note thou its Sango, not Songo ;p
Keep it coming.
This story sounds interesting, keep it coming.
I can tell this is going to be an awesome story! Update soon!
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