If only they could take Miroku to Kagome's time and get him to a hospital!!! He would have a chance!

oh my gosh, he sliced off Miroku's arm!!!!!!! I did not see that coming btw... wow... 

But omg... they got pulled into the wind tunnel! Now that I think about it... that's honestly a great idea, slicing off the arm, I mean... xD That's one way to fix the curse...

Hi, started and completed this fic today. Really enjoyed the inner perspective writing style. The style added depth and character to the story. You're a skilled writer; well done. Thank you

Wonderful please write the sequel.

Hmmmm.  This story captured me right from the start.  I really liked it.  But...the ending was a real downer.  I'm torn between liking it for being original and more realistic than any other story, and wishing it had a happy ending.  I could never say you were wrong for the ending because it's realistic, but I wish there was an 'alternate ending' where things turn out all happy.

Thanks for this story.  It was really good and well written.

i loved everything about your stories I found one the I am Alpha one and just had to read more of your writings this is the resent on i have read and like all the others its great and i cant wait for the sequel I can only hope that the story i am working on (though its not sessh/kagome story) is or turns out as great as yours

it was a pleasure reading your stories and for me to have a short attention spand i did not skip one part n any of your stories  

I am still reading but I must say something about this chapter.  Oh. My. God.  I have never read anything where Inuyasha's monolouge left my mouth hanging on the ground and I was tripping over it and slipping from the drool coming from my mouth.  That was AMAZING.  He spoke with such clarity and resignation that I must bow to you.   And bow low I will till I hit the floor underneath me!  Their 'deaths' have matured him to the point that I didn't recognize him anymore.  No gruffness, no crudeness.  Just clarity.  Clarity of mind and spirit.  His strength is flowing off of him in waves.  So much has gone into this story and I'm so intrigued by what's going on.  You have made a fan out of me.  You, my dear....ROCK!

Although some parts were confusing, I still thought the whole story was amazing. It made me cry too. I was also surprised at myself that I didn't hate Sesshoumaru at all despite the things he did. I pitied him, and when I was crying, part of it was for him. 

The lemon was amazing too! Since Sesshoumaru was so in character, I found it more exciting. ^^

I dont' know if you've already started writing it sinse I'm reading we are mates as we'll I don't think you have, I'll check after I write this XP, anyway I think a good title for the sequel could be something like "Kagome my void" or "The void of time" or some kind of compination of the two like "Kagome time is but a void between us" okey that last one was a bit cheese but you get where I'm coming from right? Using the previous story title to help the reader understand where the sequel is coming from....from the little summary I guessed that he was some how going to turn back time to correct his misstake, and I probably said this or something different in a different review but my minds now with me at the moment .... the story takes hold....XD......................Nyuka

WOW! All I can say is ...wow. I laughed, I definitely cried, and wanted to strangle sesshomaru. You portrayed them acturately and it was well written. Nicely planned, well paced and good detail! You did a great job! I'm glad to hear there is a possible sequel in the works. I can't wait to read it and look forward to sesshomaru and kagome actually being together!! Keep writing!

well, I loved both the wrinting and the plot. the book idea was great ! I think the characters were quite well-respected too.

so, maybe, even if Kagome is dead, I'll read the sequel.

Liked it, it was interesting. I can't wait for your sequeal. Humm... As for any title ideas... 'Walls'? 'Rewind'? XD I only suggested walls coz Sesshoumaru is trapped? Stuck in the void in his heart in which he tries to go and change history (thus rewind) and to do that he had to overcome many closed off walls?

LOL, sorry, that title seems lame. Hummmm...

'Changing the void'? < If you want to keep with the continuation of void being in the title. Err, Changing the void - Changing the past - To change the hole created with in his heart < Short summary on why it could be that title.

'Hollow Heart'? Haha, anyways up to you. Hope to see a sequeal up soon! :D

~SxT

hey this story was awesum....totally enjoyed it but a lil sad that kags had to die especially of old age... :(....anyways great story and PLEASE hit me up when u make ur sequel cuz i would greatly enjoy and appreciate it....LUV YAY :P

wow your completely right! i forgot about the Noh Mask..... yeah well I REALLY love your story!

Oh bloody hell this is one of the very few angst stories that I have read and enjoyed... so glad to hear there is a sequel in the works!

Wispr