Love this so far. I hope you continue.
Cheers.
My major confusion was her continued lack of consciousness, but now I know her struggle and I'm grateful she's not out of that state. I'd like to see her come out this, whenever she does or if she does, whole- I'd like her to sever her connection to Naraku and resolution with Kikyo
Shanoko (Chapter 6) - Mon 05 Mar 2018
I am so in love with this story. You are so amazing and I can't wait to read more.
Amazing update! I absolutely love this story! Can’t wait for another chapter!
Great story very well written. Looking forwarid to seeing more
Natalia (Chapter 6) - Mon 05 Mar 2018
Other than the fact that I am at a loss how she survived so many months without brbei sustained with nutrients and liquids and all that, I like the fic. The naration is descriptive and attention catching. I like how you portrayed everryoe. I am curious who abused kagome. I hope it's not inuyasha...
Sometimes you use too instead of to, but in rest it doesn't derrail from the reading. I thank you for updating and hope to see more soon.
Take care.
this is a very intriguing story plot... I would love to read more but there are no more chappies. I do hope u update real soon ... waiting impatiently to read more to see where this story leads
How did you do it? Not even half way through the first chapter, you were able to catch my attention and brought tears to my eyes. To be able to do that, to be able to to cause my chest to constrict, my breath to hold, and my tears to flow truly makes you a great writer.
I was able to feel such emotion while reading this story without even reaching the second chapter is quite unbelievable. You are remarkable. Thank you for giving me this experience and I am looking forward to reading more soon.
Deb (Chapter 6) - Sun 04 Mar 2018
That is so freaking cute~! I can't wait to read the next chapter! Please keep it up!
I can't wait to read more!!! So awesome!! Kagome's like 'Naraku your imagination sucks'.
ruyusaki (Chapter 5) - Wed 08 Apr 2015
SUCH A FABULOUS READ!!! you should totally write more ^-^
Just please wake up kagome :'( and for the author dont forget to update XD
Love it
Cant wait for an update
Anonymous (Chapter 5) - Sun 25 Jan 2015
Thank You for the update on this story. I have been thinking of it off and on and for the life of me couldn't remember the name. Rin and Kagome are both so very much in character, and I love how Sesshoumaru is slowly becoming quite taken by Kags.
Looking forward to more of this very good Fic.
Oh! I really like this!
Michela (Chapter 5) - Sat 24 Jan 2015
Love your story! Can't wait for Kagome to wake up =D
Update soon!
I like your story so far.
It sounds as if Kagome is in a coma. How is she getting food or water and how exactly did they heal all of those injuries? Was it potions and magic? And just who was Kagome's abuser? Was it Inuyasha? If it was, then Kagome needs to wake up so she can kick his a**!!! As a matter of fact, where is the rest of the gang? Surly Kagome was not alone fighting by herself? Please update! This story is just too good to just forget about......
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