Omg not naraku XD!!!! Oh wait isnt that the point o.o?

What an awful life! You do a fantastic job of writing graphic descriptions. Well done, thanks! 

Keep it coming.

As greusome as that was, it was still a kick ass chapter. I'm biting at the bit for more!

Keep it coming.

I look forward to reading more of this amazing story! Please, keep writing!

i really enjoyed the chapter

please keep it coming

Keep it coming.

Keep it coming.

Well. My brain isn't really working properly through the awe I'm feeling over this piece, so please excuse any what-the-heck-is-she-trying-to-say urges you may get while reading this review.

First, let me say that you don't have as many reviews as you should for this story - I suppose that may change as soon as people realize what an utterly beautiful thing this is. 

The emotion, the characterization, the development of Sesshomaru's thoughts, from the first realization that Kagome was important to the (hopefully) coming realization that she is one of his stars, is all very well-written. Except for a few mistakes in earlier chapters (a tense mistake or missing word/letter), I didn't notice any glaringly obvious I-don't-even-want-to-read-this-anymore problems. 

I love the thought that goes into each chapter, and although some portions of it seem rushed at times, I can tell that you've honestly taken the time to be sure that each chapter comes across exactly the way you want it. The flow of one chapter to the next - even from one scene to the next - is nearly flawless, and I have to say that I'm so very happy you're keeping Kikyo and Inuyasha's relationship in a positive light; Kikyo-bashing gets old after a while. 

Anyway (and sorry if this sounds rambly - I can't even coherently tell you how great this story is because I can't get over how wonderful it is lol), you're doing a wonderful job, and please keep it up! I'll be waiting for the next chapter!

~Aubrey

p.s. - I think I saw mention of someone looking over this for you, but if you'd like another set of eyes, I'd be happy to lend you mine, whether for this or for anything else! If so, let me know, and if not, that's fine too - I'll still read it!

p.p.s. - Memories of a Boy is also complete and total awesomesauce times a million - you're a magnificent writer, and I hope you never stop practicing your talent (artwork included)! 

please tell me that you are not done with this story oh please oh please tell me that you are not

Keep it coming.

I just LOVE the Princess Bride. This is such a good story. Can't wait to read more.

MORE! MUST READ MORE!!!!!
*bribes with cookies!*

Keep it coming.

You've got a good story going here. Just a couple notes. You often misuse "it's" (it is) for "its" (possessive). Also, it's poor technique to announce the beginning and end of a flashback like that. You should try using introductory and closing statements. They're much less jarring and don't interrupt the flow of the story like the word "flashback" does.

Other than that, I look forward to your next update.

Cannot wait for the next update!

lol hey, You're late at finding this place, I'm Coffee-Fae From DeviantArt XD

Great story, keep it coming.