Pointless smut is often fun, but that just... it felt lacking. Oh that reminds me, you have a continutiy error near the beginning. You talk about her being pushed onto her back then two paragraphs later without any mention of a position change she's seemingly on her stomach. Just thought I'd point that out.
This story sounds interesting, keep it coming.
TKE (Chapter 1) - Thu 26 Jul 2012
Definitely a way to spend a sleepless night..lol!!
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