I just love how you lure us into a sense of the calm and normal things going on and then throw something like that at us in the end!
I don't know if I should laugh or blush!! I really enjoyed this chapter because we got to see how the relationship is progressing between our favorite couple, and I like that Sesshomaru is learning how to deal with Kagome..
So, I won't repeat myself again before you even get a chance to read my last reviews. this time all I have to say is that I hope to get the next chapter soon!
I don't see any reason for you to not like this chapter. It was funny and just a little bit sexy (Sesshoumaru naked... *drools*)
Still it read well and was even a bit better about surroundings and the world around them.
I hate to seem redundant, but still I really think you should find some way to incorperate more details of what's going on. settings, and feelings, things Sesshoumaru sees, feels, hears. I think it will add length and a bit more reality or a sense of where we are in the story if you could do something like that..
I love where you are guiding us with this story, just try and make us all feel a bit less blind!
I am so excited to see where you take us with your story
Mizui (Chapter 5) - Sat 04 Aug 2012
Have I mentioned how entirely awesome I think this whole thing is? I absolutely loved the ending of this chapter!
I kind of wish there was still a bit more details about where they are and how that affects the situations..
Anyway Keep up the great work!
You're doing very well for you're first fic! The characters are very well in character and I'm still curious as to where inu and the others are.
Cant wait for more. :)
Keep it coming.
Keep it coming.
Mizui (Chapter 4) - Mon 30 Jul 2012
Oh my goodness!! I can't believe Sesshomaru said that!! :O what will poor Kagome do!? Ahhh!! I can't wait for your next update!
Keep it coming.
Mizui (Chapter 3) - Sat 28 Jul 2012
I can't wait to read the next chapter. I'm excited to see how Kags deals with her blindness. You're writing really well so far, though I feel as blind as Kagome about some spots, maybe you could try and work in some more description about things she hears or maybe see about describing things from what Sesshoumaru sees, so that readers get a better sense of what is going on.
Anyway, Can't wait for the next chapter!
Keep it coming.
~~Oooo I'm anxious to find out what happened! ^__^ And I like your writing style! Just thought you should know! ;)
Keep it coming.
This story sounds interesting, I hope Sesshomaru brings Kagome back to life. Keep it coming.
~~I am intrigued, to say the least! I look forward to seeing more of this! :D
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