This. Is. So. Sooooo. Good!!!! I love it already!
And your writing is really good too!! I really really like it!
Hope I can read more of you soon!! I can't wait to read what happens next!
Kanda (Chapter 18) - Mon 12 Feb 2018
about this being the last chapter! please, update! i was hoping we could see sess’ reaction to this mistreatment! someone needs get their heads looped off! poor kags. qq and you write perfectly! don’t think you don’t! i’m enjoying yer writing!
Please please update
Great story so far. I like how in character sesshomaru still is even though he's doing something completely out of character for him. Was it jaken that dragged kagome to her room or another servant? How will sesshomaru react when faced with kagome's uncontrolled power? She's probably filthy from not being able to walk around to bathe. She's also most likely infected wounds or almost because she's hallucinating about naraku being there. Heads are gonna role because sesshomaru told them to 'care for the miko's wounds' but no care has been given. In fact she's been mistreated severely and will have to stay with sesshomaru longer to reheal reopened wounds.
I'd like to be your beta if you haven't accepted one already.
Update soon onegai
Ja ne
ponpiri (Chapter 18) - Sat 21 Oct 2017
This is really confusing now. I thought a incarnation was present at the beginning of the story not Naraku himself. And how is she walking when she could hardly stand when she entered the 'castle'?
Hopefully what happened to her gets cleared up soon. And your writing isn't that bad without a beta.
ponpiri (Chapter 9) - Sat 21 Oct 2017
I mean, really. Who complains this much about their caretaker, especially one that revived them from death?! She needs to stop.
Misao (Chapter 18) - Sat 21 Oct 2017
OMGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG come backkkkk dont leave this here I'm going to die.... continue continue continueeee!!!!
Shyla (Chapter 18) - Fri 20 Oct 2017
Love this story!!!
I just wanted to leave a comment and offer my services as a beta reader, I'm a pretty experienced writer, I usually do all of my writing on Tumblr, not here, so feel free to contact me if you would like any help!
-Shyla
Susy V (Chapter 18) - Fri 20 Oct 2017
Cliff hanger! Man, you've got me wondering how this is going to play out! Is she trying to anger him so she can be put out of her misery? Will she believe that shes in his castle and not anywhere near Naraku?
I have horrible writing skills or I would volunteer lol awesome chapter can't wait for the next one
Gaaah the cliffhanger! Interesting story so far. I look forward to more!
Omg....two chaptes out of the blue....celebrates
Well sesshoumaru ...she is your guest...someone to take care of
Uoh...her mental health...
Mona (Chapter 17) - Tue 17 Oct 2017
Hopefully you will be able to complete this fic.
Thanks for updating! I can’t wait for the next chapter!!!
oh wow I love this story so great but very disappointed when there wasn't any more chappies after the 17th chapter. pls update this very soon like today this hour?!,!
Misao (Chapter 17) - Tue 17 Oct 2017
OMG please one more please pretty pleaseeeeee????
Poor girl she's resilient, but damn poor kagome. Can't wait for the next chapter
Izzy (Chapter 16) - Mon 16 Oct 2017
Holy smokes poor kagome
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