Both chapters are great, keep it coming.
Man, inuyasha is such a pig and an asshole. I hope to see Kagome snaps and start kicking his ass that he wouldn't dare try to pull something like that ever again in the next chapter. Now, that I would love to see Lol. If that were happen then that will put a smile on my face. I just hate seeing characters being weak and helpless. Plus, am happy to see a fanfic of Kagome being elven, but their are many different types in the elven race just to let you know.
Keep it coming.
This story sounds interesting, keep it coming.
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